Fic: Observations, Ch 16

[anon_j_anon]

“I have a dress uniform?”

Comments

[ariadnechan]

i love this one!!!

[margarks]

I also have to tell you that I love your dialogue. I think you really get the characters spot on. It's hard to do so much back and forth dialogue and write it well enough to allow the reader to visualize who is saying what without the usual "Uhura said, Jim said, Spock said" type tags. Good job!

[danack]

Great so far! And that last line! LOL!