Fic: Observations, Ch 215

[anon_j_anon]

Comments

[danahid]

My thoughts and reactions are all over the place.

Overall, an interesting examination of what helps to heal --

Also, I enjoyed the slight diversion about the recruitment ads. I am very interested in such ads, so liked this particularly.

[emluv]

You need to stop making me cry. That last set of messages got me all choked up and completely undid the amusement factor of Jim making Spock look "intense."

*sniff*

[the_moonmoth]

“You know that recruiting ad for Starfleet the Admiralty wanted to make?”

Oh noooo! *gleeful*

[the_moonmoth]

You know I've often thought this while reading Observations, but I don't think I've mentioned it before, but a lot of this slice of life stuff, the more real side of things, reminds me an awful lot of Babylon 5 and why I loved that show so much. I've never seen it in ST fic before, though, and it works so well here. I'm wondering if you (or anyone) could have written a story of this length without that side of things, making them more human.

[firenzesun]

Wow, that last part was too sweet. I really, really love your fic. And ut's true you really manage to put in it stuff from real life. It's an imoressive work!!

[devin_chain]

I love the way this chapter ends. My husband was diagnosed with AML a year ago, and I know he'd love a "leukemia is tough, but you can do it" message from the crew of the Enterprise. :)

Enjoying the fic. I was waiting to reach the end before commenting, but you surprised me with this.