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Mar 25, 2013 14:18

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:37:33 UTC
i had a big argument with my english teacher today, she just drove me nuts. there's this sentence:
Laura __________ (not to allow) to go abroad before she ___________ (to renew) her health insurance.
it should be past simple/past perfect. we spent like 30mins arguing which is which and i'm still confused.
i just thought i'd ask here because there are a lot native speakers and people who speak really good english.

i'm very sorry about offtopic but i really need to know

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:43:47 UTC
Laura isn't allowed to go abroad before she renews her health insurance.

It's an awkward sentence in general. This sounds better.

Before Laura renews her health insurance she isn't allowed to go abroad.

Swapping it sounds better IMO.

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:47:18 UTC
yeah, i know, it's sounds weird enough on its own.
and if we were to use past tenses? simple and perfect?

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:49:43 UTC
AYRT

Past tense would be this:
Laura wasn't allowed to go abroad before she renewed her health insurance.

Also after thinking about it I think using "until" instead of "before" would make the sentence less awkward too, so like this:
Laura isn't allowed to go abroad until she renews her health insurance.

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:52:47 UTC
yeah, I agree about "until".
so no past perfect required at all then?
I thought it should be "Laura hadn't been allowed to go abroad before she renewed her health insurance." so that it's more like a sequence of events: for some time she wasn't able to go anywhere and then she renewed the insurance.

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:56:46 UTC
Yeah, this version: "Laura hadn't been allowed to go abroad before she renewed her health insurance." is definitely less correct than this one: "Laura wasn't allowed to go abroad before she renewed her health insurance."

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anonymous March 26 2013, 17:04:52 UTC
okay, thanks a lot! :)

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:44:55 UTC
what was the argument about though? which tenses to use?

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:46:26 UTC
yes, sorry i didn't make it clear enough

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:46:34 UTC
past simple/past perfect combo sounds fine to me?

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anonymous March 26 2013, 16:48:07 UTC
yes but which bracket is which?

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anonymous March 26 2013, 17:12:07 UTC
I'd say Laura wasn't allowed to go abroad before she renewed her health insurance.

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anonymous March 26 2013, 21:16:48 UTC
Just be thankful she remembered to renew it tbh, otherwise Derek wouldn't have been able to extravagant purchase the camero.

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