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annj_g80

Hangman Coming

Aug 22, 2009 17:24

Title: Hangman Coming
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fanfiction, fandom: supernatural, fic challenge

Comments 30

sendintheklowns August 22 2009, 16:45:29 UTC

Loved it, doll! You so capture Sam's discomfort in being in this situation. He's no hard-ass and sure enough others can tell that, too.

'Sam can't help the smile creeping up on his face and suddenly the greyish light of the day looks a little bit friendlier and less gloomy.' *nods* Being in his brother's company is like Sam's security blanket here. Great ending.

annj_g80 August 25 2009, 06:35:53 UTC

Thank you for the awesome review *is proud* I should do codas more often because it's so much easier to play with their emotions this way.

ghostfour August 22 2009, 17:31:11 UTC

This? Rocked. I can totally see Sam getting jumped while in there... if for no other reason than he's so big and to make a point. And I loved that Sam saved himself - and his reaction to his powers... so very much like what happened in Max's house.

The ending was perfect. You can almost feel Sam relaxing just being with Dean. And Dean knowing something is up, but Sam not talking. Very much in character. And the writing was strong too. Your tone and voice were spot on, IMO.

Thanks for sharing.

annj_g80 August 25 2009, 06:37:20 UTC

You're very much welcome and also thank you for your wonderful words *glee*.

geminigrl11 August 22 2009, 17:45:41 UTC

Heee! I won't take your firstborn, but next time I am your way, you can buy me a marshmallow peep :D

Awesome fic! Sam's SUPREME discomfort with being in prison comes through loud and clear, and you've added the TK dimension, which is amazing, and just fits so well. I love that he doesn't tell Dean about it at all--not the beat-down, not the TK, not where his roommate got his nickname. I can totally see this happening as an ep.

annj_g80 August 25 2009, 06:38:28 UTC

Marshmallow peep? Deal. Thanks for your kind words and again for the great, speedy beta :-)

harrigan August 22 2009, 19:17:44 UTC

This was creepily painful to read! And I mean that in a good way.

[shudders]

annj_g80 August 25 2009, 17:47:52 UTC

Good way? That's good :-). Thank you.

debbiel66 August 22 2009, 20:20:13 UTC

Sam still waits to hear Dean go on talking. Anything to make him forget where he is, who he is with. Forget, that he is surrounded by walls and bars and sick bastards. Forget what happened today. What he had done. Had to do, thank you very much.

This was such a nice change of pace - a very enjoyable story with strong phrasing, like the passage above. Thanks so much for sharing this!

annj_g80 August 25 2009, 17:48:49 UTC

Strong phrasing, huh? *blushing* Hehe, thanks for that.