...truth is natural like the wind that blows...
So I posted my story in an alternate journal I just signed up for:
etiennegalvan
I didn't feel like going through and putting in the codes to italicize whatever I had in italics in word, but I'm sure you people can have a feel for what words get emphasized.
People who have an interest in writing / know how to critique writing - please look and comment back on this entry. I don't want to hear "Oh, it was great" and that's it. I want to hear criticism or at least what works so I know not to fiddle with it too much.
Do my characters come off as likeable? Or do I need to work on Sticks some more?
Feedback? Please?
...Let the truth blow like a hurricane through me...
etiennegalvan
I didn't feel like going through and putting in the codes to italicize whatever I had in italics in word, but I'm sure you people can have a feel for what words get emphasized.
People who have an interest in writing / know how to critique writing - please look and comment back on this entry. I don't want to hear "Oh, it was great" and that's it. I want to hear criticism or at least what works so I know not to fiddle with it too much.
Do my characters come off as likeable? Or do I need to work on Sticks some more?
Feedback? Please?
...Let the truth blow like a hurricane through me...