fate takes us all in hand

Feb 07, 2008 00:38

ok, i had the worst case of the lazy bug and can't really bring myself to write anything for the past few months. was so swamped at work, that all i really want to do when i get back is just crash, you know ( Read more... )

neji/hinata, fic, naruto

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kanoi_trace February 7 2008, 03:06:11 UTC
Awwwww, how cute! I really like it.

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annilra February 8 2008, 16:02:13 UTC
really? oh, so glad that you like. (^_^)

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^^ anonymous February 7 2008, 07:42:58 UTC
I appreciated the part you wrote that they all redo the mistakes of their parents...
It seemed to be soooo sweet ^^

Writing about a circle is also some kind of fitting, since Neji means spiral. Probably you should write an additional fic to it, that is headed towards the sun.

:)

Flammendo

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Re: ^^ annilra February 8 2008, 16:08:18 UTC
well, i was going for the whole circle theme but it being related to neji's name didn't hit me until you pointed it out... silly me!

and now that i think about it, doing another drabble based on hinata's name is a great idea. though it'll probably take a while... but still, thanks!

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shoujo22 February 7 2008, 19:45:00 UTC
Wow. You never cease to amaze me. That was just awesome!

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annilra February 8 2008, 16:12:12 UTC
oh, shoujo-chan! i think i've said this before but i just have to say it again... you are always good for my ego, seriously! (^_^)

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anonymous March 2 2008, 09:51:29 UTC
Hey dude this is soooooooooo frigggin good you know, maybe you know when you were exlaining how and why he fell in love with her that would have been good ... BUT i did lovethe last line ...

Love Love Nejihina

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anonymous March 13 2008, 12:57:24 UTC
Eeeehhh !! I've never tought of this idea !! So Neji is back to love her, back to protect her, to admire her ... Who-ah, great !! This cycle fate theme fits Neji so perfectly. Because, Hyuuga has the endless cycle of destiny that forces him back but this turned out sweet for him. <3

Two thumbs up !!! <3

~poppy

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