Criminal Minds - Fanfiction - The Other Man

[annievh]

Title: The Other Man
Author: AnnieVH
Summary: Hotch needs some answers.
Rating: T
Genre: drama, angsty
Characters or Pairing: Hotch/Haley
Spoilers: up to episode 100
Disclaimer: don't own, just borrow.
Note: It is still unbetaed, so I'm open to volunteers, please. Comment with info if you're interest. I need some grammar help.

Comments

[underspell102]

This was a great read! Poor Hotch! I think you got into his character quite well, and I can totally imagine that ending taking place.

I've never been a beta for anyone before. If you're still looking, I'd be happy to help but I don't know if I would be any good at it. My name is Amy, BTW. My email is snowball2645@yahoo.com :-)

[annievh]

i'm happy you liked it.
and if you wanna give it a shot, i'll e-mail you my e-mail.
how is your grammar?
lol

[underspell102]

My grammar is good. :-)

[annievh]

Great!
I just emailed you.

[daylyn]

Ouch. This is very raw and painful -- and that's a good thing! Well done.

[annievh]

thank you!
:-)
btw - loved the icon.

[katewallace]

I can totally see Hotch doing this, being so caught up in his grief and pain and wondering what Haley saw in this man. Thanks for sharing this with us!

[annievh]

Thank you for reading!
:-)

[kuriadalmatia]

Nicely done. I like the distance you establish by referring to him as "Adams" and the domineering bullishness of Hotch. There is a tenseness about this, a brittleness about Hotch that you know he's holding on to things and just trying to make sense of it all. And when Hotch cuts through everything, his heartbreaking "I didn't need to know who you were" at the end is very powerful. Thanks for sharing!

[annievh]

Wow! Thank you!
That was very kind of you.
:-*

[andalisays]

this was intense. I felt like I was a fly on the wall, watching it play out. Wonderful.

[annievh]

thank you!
I'm flattered.
:-*