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anniespinkhouse

The Unsuitable Slave. (NC-17) Part 27/34

Nov 17, 2011 15:56

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ayane42 November 17 2011, 16:32:25 UTC

holy crap!! omg!!!

hot sex, then omg what's the lie???

can't wait :)

anniespinkhouse November 17 2011, 16:46:18 UTC

Good grief, that was fast! *my lips are sealed* I'll take "Holy Crap!" as a compliment and say thank you!

ayane42 November 17 2011, 19:19:53 UTC

Holy crap is a good thing. That's my only had one cup of coffee and omg you updated exclamation. Then I'm reading and realizing how devoted Jared is to Jensen and he's submissive and pleasuring his Master and Jensen drops a bomb on him, and me!!! And I'm shocked and trying to not choke on my coffee first thing in the morning.

Seriously great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens :)

anniespinkhouse November 18 2011, 00:51:38 UTC

Oops. *here let me polish the coffee stains from the floor*
I never operate on less than 2 cups in a morning.

via_jupiter November 17 2011, 16:45:19 UTC

Oh, man you've added a new tangle to your web haven't you? Heck of a cliffie you've left us hanging from. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

anniespinkhouse November 17 2011, 16:56:26 UTC

Oops ;) I promise the cliffhanger wasn't intentional. This part of the storyline just didn't fit any other way - it was either too long or too short any other way. Thanks for the comment.

cookiemom6067 November 17 2011, 17:04:27 UTC

Oh, man! What has Jensen done now?

anniespinkhouse November 18 2011, 00:39:12 UTC

*zips mouth* Jensen is not the easiest master or lover for Jared to have. It's nice to know you're still with the boys :)

sylsdarkplace November 17 2011, 17:06:03 UTC

You and me -- I wonder about us sometimes. Our boys are just so twisted.
And I understand the readers comments here. Been there. On the other hand, perfectly reflects the fic in a we feel what Jared feels kind of way.
You're so awesome.

anniespinkhouse November 18 2011, 00:41:27 UTC

Poor Jared only ever gets a part of the story. I still sometimes wonder if I am too cruel to Jensen by only having the Jared POV but I'm liking the challenge it presents. *blushes* It helps to have a great cheerleader!!

sylsdarkplace November 18 2011, 01:58:07 UTC

I hadn't thought of it before, but I did the same thing to Jensen in Without Recourse, so I know what you mean.

Jared POV junkerin June 28 2012, 06:40:52 UTC

I read "Without Recourse" and now the "The unsuitable Slave" (still reading) and I can asure you both did a great job. For "without" you did show some part of Jensen. Here it would be a diffrent story if you would write it form Jensen POV and possible very difficult to write because I found him very cruel and manipulating.

legion11 November 17 2011, 17:20:40 UTC

WHAT????

(OMG, OMFG, please, please, pretty please, don´t let me wait!!!!)

anniespinkhouse November 18 2011, 00:43:32 UTC

eeek. I tried so hard to break the story at another point but it didn't seem to flow right.
I fear I have a target on my back that can only be erased by some rapid writing! Thanks for the comment.

legion11 November 18 2011, 12:27:59 UTC

I don´t want to pressure you! (only I really want to)