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The Unsuitable Slave. (NC-17) Part 13/34

Aug 31, 2011 19:08

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jolieblon May 28 2012, 20:53:44 UTC

Are we sure Jensen isn't off his meds?
{I will whip you if you bite} How about showing Jared how good it feels first, and then walk him through how to give a blow job. And do it without choking him while you're at it.

Then to threaten him again with the bench? To deck him out without taking a minute to explain WHY it has to be done? And then to harp on how Jared doesn't trust him.....arrrrgggggggg

locknkey July 19 2014, 09:24:15 UTC

loling at your comment. You said exactly how I felt about everything. :)

anniespinkhouse July 20 2014, 13:48:56 UTC

Jensen would I'm sure have found everything quicker and easier if he's explained.He is unpredictable and his head seems to be all over the place.

smidgeson September 4 2012, 09:43:48 UTC

Oh I've died and gone to heaven...the jewellery! So sexy and so one of my kinks. Jewellery in public.

The blade beneath his toe is pretty inventive and fresh too.:)

anniespinkhouse September 4 2012, 22:45:27 UTC

Mmm. I *may* have allowed myself to indulge in a kink for this chapter but I think it would be in character and keeping with the plot. I will admit to the toe blade being an invention, based on something I've seen - but I have no idea if it would work for real - *don't try this at home kids* I did think that Jensen would be looking for ways to keep Jared feeling 'secured' through it all.
Thanks for commenting :)

j2ladyackles May 19 2014, 22:30:09 UTC

Does Jensen actually know what he wants? He's been saying how he wants it to be different with Jared and he wants to love him and how he'll never hurt him again....and then he threatens him with the bench.... So confused.