Oh some tasty clues about Jared's mom and her illness. And confusion still reigns with Jared and Jensen. The sword scene was lovely, but then at chess I want to smack Jensen upside the head. What does he expect Jared to do profess his undying love when he's floating in a sea of uncertainty. ARGHHHHH. Jensen.....
Alona's point of view is a complete 180 from Jared that I find it beneficial for Jared to interact with her more; it helps him see the other side of it, I suppose. You gotta make the most of a situation, especially when it's something as bleak as this.
Jensen is still such a baffling character. One moment, he's redeeming himself from hurting Jared, and the next, he's letting his failure and insecurities overtake his progress with Jared. It's really frustrating and I can just feel how confused and helpless and angry Jared is, and the sad part is, he's probably just mad at himself. God, it's like one step forward and two steps back with these boys.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this more and more as I read. Is there an estimation yet on how long this is going to be? I'm just curious, haha. But hey, I won't be complaining if it ends up being an epic length ;DDDD
Jensen is certainly struggling. Alona and Ethan do represent the total opposite of Jared and Jensen, so the interaction must be helpful.
I have just updated with a long chapter and it may be the last for a week or so. I am still wishing for LJ to catch up and sort out the formatting issues - I have so many frustrating little errors that I can see but can't correct without screwing everything else up. (Inc. not being able to add next chapter links)
I estimated 22 chapters originally and I'm certainly on target for over 20 and less than 25 - I've got to 18 in draft form and I'll be writing rather than correcting or posting this week.
OMG!!!!!! It is AWESOME story! I´m so glad I found it! I love it.
And Jensen is so dense! From the begining is Jared falling for him and yet he can´t see it. And Jared is confused and have no way to expres his feelings and I´m totaly babbling.
Please, have mercy,update soon.
(I´m going to add you as a friend so I don´t miss anythink! Hope, you don´t mind.)
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And confusion still reigns with Jared and Jensen. The sword scene was lovely, but then at chess I want to smack Jensen upside the head. What does he expect Jared to do profess his undying love when he's floating in a sea of uncertainty. ARGHHHHH. Jensen.....
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Jensen is still such a baffling character. One moment, he's redeeming himself from hurting Jared, and the next, he's letting his failure and insecurities overtake his progress with Jared. It's really frustrating and I can just feel how confused and helpless and angry Jared is, and the sad part is, he's probably just mad at himself. God, it's like one step forward and two steps back with these boys.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this more and more as I read. Is there an estimation yet on how long this is going to be? I'm just curious, haha. But hey, I won't be complaining if it ends up being an epic length ;DDDD
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I have just updated with a long chapter and it may be the last for a week or so. I am still wishing for LJ to catch up and sort out the formatting issues - I have so many frustrating little errors that I can see but can't correct without screwing everything else up. (Inc. not being able to add next chapter links)
I estimated 22 chapters originally and I'm certainly on target for over 20 and less than 25 - I've got to 18 in draft form and I'll be writing rather than correcting or posting this week.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
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It is AWESOME story! I´m so glad I found it! I love it.
And Jensen is so dense! From the begining is Jared falling for him and yet he can´t see it. And Jared is confused and have no way to expres his feelings and I´m totaly babbling.
Please, have mercy,update soon.
(I´m going to add you as a friend so I don´t miss anythink! Hope, you don´t mind.)
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