Chapter 16: Past the Garden Shed and Straight Ahead (J2, NC-17)

[anniespinkhouse]

Fic title: Past the Garden Shed and Straight Ahead
Artist name: amberdreams
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: past domestic abuse, sexual language, cussing, Chad

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He was under a dazzling spotlight with the Queen, while everything else faded into a black fog around them.

Comments

[roxymissrose]

Oh no!! This is nothing like I expected! what a heart-breaking chapter! Poor Jared, it's not really his fault--he was a child and children don't understand mortality, they just understand make it stop, and are happy in the moment that it does. And now, (and i think has been for a long time) he's so determined to suffer, he's making everyone around him suffer too! As for poor, poor Jensen--the boy is an *idiot*!! What was he thinking???

omg, I *LOVED* this chapter in a painful way. But how perfect that Ruth was his mother, and how perfect was her involvement. I like that she was involved woth he children's lives but also kind of not--it felt very fae-like! ♥

[anniespinkhouse]

Oh, that dark streak of mine! It absolutely had to be Ruth, for me. With some Rowena typecasting she has that flexible morality and I think her features are a little fae (plus - green eyes).