Saturday Short #6

[annemariewrites]

Whoa. I have no idea what happened here. I wanted to tell a story about menehune. Next time, maybe.

Invisible

“You’re never going to experience life from reading books and watching TV, Ikaikalani,” my mother says. She’s looming in my doorway. All five feet of her.

Comments

[fabulousfrock]

Only they’ve cast the guy that plays Hurley on LOST as me. LOL

I also like the beginning paragraph about the fantasy book he's reading.

[annemariewrites]

Ha ha. It's Oedipus, but with lamer names. ;)

[beedeecee]

i laughed out loud several times and want to read more. also, i want to go to hawaii.

[annemariewrites]

Aww, thanks :D :D Hawaii is gorgeous. They should have a writer's conference there ... only I don't think much writing would get done.

[anonymous]

Dude, I am so jealous of the way you write!!! I love the little details you use to make your characters pop. Man, I so need to go people watching!

L

[annemariewrites]

People-watching is so much fun!! And you can do it anywhere (even when watching movies or TV shows).