Comments | annakovsky: FIC: With Crooked Hands (The Office, Jim/Ryan), Part 2

annakovsky

FIC: With Crooked Hands (The Office, Jim/Ryan), Part 2

Mar 31, 2008 15:08

Title: With Crooked Hands
Fandom: The Office (US)
Rating: R (for sex and violence)
Pairing: Jim/Ryan
Length: 19,700 words
Summary: Jim and Ryan, on their way home.
AN: For festschrift. This is a fic set in the Mosepocalypse (the still unpublished apocalyptic Office fic from Mose's point of view, veering off from canon in mid-season 3, that kyrafic and I have been ( Read more... )

jim/ryan, fanfiction, ryan howard, jim halpert, fanfic: the office, mosepocalypse, with crooked hands

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annakovsky April 4 2008, 14:58:29 UTC

<3 <3 THANK YOU!

miss_bennie March 31 2008, 20:36:51 UTC

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. THIS IS BETTER THAN I COULD HAVE EVER IMAGINED. I'm having a spaz attack over here, excuse me. It's like a clinic in how to write awesome, slashy h/c. WITH JIM AND RYAN. God, how do you write Ryan so well?

Jim kisses Ryan, pulling him in by the hand on the back of his neck, rough and shaky and desperate. Ryan doesn’t kiss him back, and then he does.

I don't know why, but that was the hottest line ever in the history of hot lines. I--I guess I just really, really liked it. This fic made me feel all shaky, like I got shot in the leg and killed someone and did it a lot with Ryan. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3333333333

annakovsky April 4 2008, 14:59:17 UTC

<3 <3 <3 <3!! Thanks! I was a little worried about the Ryan voice, so that is awesome to hear.

octette March 31 2008, 21:20:34 UTC

!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!

*hands*

annakovsky April 4 2008, 14:59:37 UTC

<3 <3 <3!! I'm psyched that you're watching the shoooow!

octette April 4 2008, 15:04:01 UTC

i am stuck at the end of s3/beginning of s4. i will come back to it, i think, but i am overwhelmed with humiliation on behalf of the characters again!

annakovsky April 4 2008, 15:10:03 UTC

I know, it gets pretty intense. I'm impressed you could power through it at all! You're practically through all the episodes!

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hippie_lover March 31 2008, 21:22:38 UTC

Oh wow. Amazing! I can't wait for the rest of this fic to be out!! This was soooo good!

annakovsky April 4 2008, 14:59:52 UTC

Thanks so much!

Wow. WOW. (World of warcraft? Sort of appropriate.) anonymous March 31 2008, 21:34:01 UTC

That was unbelievable. That was a really, really, really unbelievably great story. That was an outtake?! First things first, this story sends chills down my spine, just imagining how hardcore amazing Mosepocolypse is going to be. This epic story (20,000 words! But you know that) is a sidetrack from a bigger story (from Mose's point of view!) that has taken over a year. You should publish or set up a paypal system or something- this isn't even a hobby anymore, this is a legitimate craft ( ... )

Re: Wow. WOW. (World of warcraft? Sort of appropriate.) annakovsky April 4 2008, 15:02:18 UTC

Oh man, thank you so much! What fantastic feedback!

This must have necessitated either some real research or lifetimes in broken-world books and movies, because it feels so terribly right.

Ha, unfortunately this fic is what the inside of my head looks like a lot of the time. Thanks, being raised with fundamentalist eschatology! Hee.

Seriously, thank you -- I don't even know what to say!