Oh, Rati - Oneshot (5/5)

[annafeu]

Title: Oh, Rati
Chapters: oneshot
Pairings: Sehun/Luhan
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, romance, angst
Warnings (SPOILER WARNINGS! highlight to see): explicit content, violence, incest, character deathSummary: Sehun leaves his land in search of adventure, and finds a little too much of it in a neighbouring village where he meets a veiled enchantress that

Comments

[tripmee]

OH MY GOD OKAY. LIKE, OH MY GOD WHAT.

NO. NOOOOOOOOOO

you are such a good writer ;~; i really love it when exotic (mind my pun) aus are written well and god you pulled this off incredibly well! the plot was really exciting on the whole and for some reason i knew everything seemed way too happy and i guessed that shit was going to happen AND JFC YOU MADE SHIT HAPPEN YOU MADE TOTAL EXCREMENT HAPPEN /sobs endlessly

the end was really quite the shocker (partially because i chose to not highlight the warnings until after reading everything orz) but i actually think it was a pretty suitable ending? idek someone should shoot me for being morbid

i adored your characterization of everyone too. sometimes i can't totally appreciate it when the exo boys are turned into evil dudes (maybe because i adore all of them to bits ^^; oh wells~) and it really irks me when the characterization doesn't even fit. but jesus it's like you made everyone perfecttttttt and i mean it, seriously T_______T even down to chanyeol being kind of rash at the end. i don't know if you even intended for that to stand out or if you gave it much thought but it stood out for me.

basically i like you. quite a fucking lot. =3

who am i kidding I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FIC OKAY this was epic and sweet and devastatingly depressing at the end

thanks for writing and shring this! ^____^

[annafeu]

ahhhh thank you so much for your lovely comment <3 T____T i'm glad you liked it jkgnaskafbjglkalcks