Fishing for Lake Trout (July Challenge)

Jul 18, 2010 10:04

AU/AU. A little bit of childhood nostalgia featuring our Jack and Ennis...

Warnings - none
Length - 1,800 words
Thanks - to hesamathgeek for the beta :)

Note - I actually started two other stories for this challenge, but this is the one that appeared randomly. It popped out after playing around on Youtube and watching the intro to kids' TV show Huckleberry ( Read more... )

oneshot, fishingforlaketrout

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tmn1966 July 18 2010, 15:32:54 UTC
I really enjoyed this. Their first kiss, their awkwardness.

Very good! Thank you for sharing. :)

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annabirmingham July 19 2010, 01:17:12 UTC
Thanks so much - glad you enjoyed it :)
Anna x

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roby100 July 18 2010, 16:55:10 UTC
Beautiful!
The first kiss, gentle and then deep... and the first fishing trip! Really great.
Thanks so much.
A big hug
Roby

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annabirmingham July 19 2010, 01:18:15 UTC
Thanks Roby! Big hugs to you too :)
Anna x

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hampshirerose July 18 2010, 19:24:47 UTC
What a great story and so descriptive...that kiss made my knees go weak!!

I was totally besotted with Tom Sawyer,Huck Finn and Becky Thatcher when I was young and this took me right back there. I think I must reread these stories soon.

rose x

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annabirmingham July 19 2010, 01:19:55 UTC
Thanks so much Rose! I adored the TV series when I was little and wanted so much to be friends with Huck and Tom. I guess they were my childhood Jack and Ennis!
Anna x

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camillar July 18 2010, 20:44:08 UTC
This was very sweet! I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for sharing it with us! :)

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annabirmingham July 19 2010, 01:20:14 UTC
Thanks Camilla! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Anna x

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mrs_spamlad July 18 2010, 21:06:34 UTC
This was great!

Very descriptive of the time period and setting, and such a clever approach to the challenge!

Thanks for sharing :)
jill

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annabirmingham July 19 2010, 01:21:11 UTC
Thanks Jill! It was a complete accident how this came about, I never intended to be inspired by a TV theme - but there you go! Thanks for reading :)
Anna x

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