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I quite like the way it has turned out. Ash's character is looking at his glove thing, and while the lines of the composition are designed to draw your eyes to it the other characters are looking off the page at something worrying which Ash's character is oblivious to.
Erm, I'm thinking of getting a wacom tablet, as we are using a laptop with a teeny-tiny touchpad an inch across which makes doing anything beyond just moving your finger and hoping the line ends up in the right place nearly impossible .