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[ann2059]

I know I'm monothematic, but I take too much pleasure from drawing L & Light necking whenever and wherever they can. Yes, I know I'm shallow.
Try as I might I couldn't make L's shirt look right. I can't put my finger on what's wrong with it, but it just doesn't seem right and I don't know how to fix it.  Any ideas? D:
Also, the background is once

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[ann2059]

What about his jawline?

[bellumed]

Maybe you should've connected the two lines that make it up? I'm not exactly sure, but it does look a little off...

[ann2059]

Err... the second line, the upper one was supposed to be an earlobe. But you've got a point there. I should have connected them.

[ann2059]

Don't mention it! I'm glad you pointed it out, now I know what else to fix before I start inking it :D