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Fic: Blister

Sep 26, 2009 10:02

Title: Blister
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Kuroshitsuji
Pairing: slight SebaCiel
Warnings: First Kuroshitsuji fic? Might be a little OOC.
Summary: His soul, coming to the surface, face cold, hands twitching, small pale butterfly hands, still locked in chrysalis, not yet grown.

( Blister )

kuroshitsuji, fanfic

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LDFKLDJLKDSJKLOWAKJLASD"SD<3<3<3 crescent_moony September 26 2009, 21:21:22 UTC

HOLY. FUCKING. SHIT.

Where the hell have you been hiding all of this time?! WHY IS THIS ONLY YOUR FIRST KURO!FIC?! THIS IS BRILLIANT. OH MY GOD-- MY HEART IS RACING. I THINK I'M GOING TO CRY. MY CHEST HURTS LIKE A BITCH~~~

GAH. Oh my goodness... excuse me for that... but I am SO IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC RIGHT NOW. Everything about it-- the characterization (so perfect!), the word choice (you had such stunning similes and metaphors!), and the Middlefords being the bad guys?! GENIUS. I'm so ashamed of myself for never having thought of it before! (I sure hope Yana Toboso-sensei is taking notes... ^_~)

Oh, I have to go lay down now. The sheer awesomeness of this is making me dizzy...

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

PLEASE KEEP WRITING! OR ELSE. XD

Re: LDFKLDJLKDSJKLOWAKJLASD"SD<3<3<3 ankoku_tenshi September 27 2009, 03:47:15 UTC

I actually didn't have the Middlefords as the bad guys, though I guess it seemed that way. But I think Iit would be very awesome if I could remedy that immediately. :D

I was inspired for this after reading House of Red, and the song 'Wait it Out' came out on my playlist, and I just had to write it. But I'm really happy you enjoyed it; I've always been a fan of your writing, so it means a lot. :DDD

Re: LDFKLDJLKDSJKLOWAKJLASD"SD<3<3<3 crescent_moony September 27 2009, 04:30:02 UTC

Don't tell me that! XD; You say: "EXACTLY AS I PLANNED" and no one is ever the wiser! ^_~ (But I think I may borrow the idea, nevertheless... <3)

D'awww, thanks for saying so! -^_^- *cuddles*

Re: LDFKLDJLKDSJKLOWAKJLASD"SD<3<3<3 ankoku_tenshi September 27 2009, 04:38:07 UTC

I think it would be really awesome if you did write that up actually. I'm so bad with plots; I can never carry on multi-parters because of that. XDD I don't even know what sort of motive you could use for the Marchioness oging nuts over her own family members.

Re: LDFKLDJLKDSJKLOWAKJLASD"SD<3<3<3 crescent_moony September 27 2009, 15:19:59 UTC

Oh, I already have plans, now... XD *insert evil laughter here*

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