[fic] touched

Jan 14, 2010 20:36

Title: Touched
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Canada, Ukraine, and a special guest; Canada/Ukraine
Genre: Romance
Rating: Waaaaay T
Warning: Kissing, mentioned arousal, nothing worse than that.
Summary: For special_sight's Winter exchange for frickninja, who requested, Ukraine has back problems from her "great peaks". Canada decides to be a sweetie and give her ( Read more... )

♪ fandom: axis powers hetalia, ♫ character: ukraine, ¶ pairing: canada/ukraine, ♫ character: russia, ♫ character: canada

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smrtypantz January 15 2010, 01:59:50 UTC
xDDDDDDDDDDDD

oh my goodness, that was too...GAH!

ok, I have never read anything so...explicit from you, Rose ;D But that had to be the cutest thing ever! The way they were both shy at first, but worked their way up...and poor Ukraine with her back trouble with something she really can't help :[

but wow, Matthew really does have magical fingers, doesn't he? xD I loved this line in particular: It was right then and there that he'd decided he never wanted to hear her say Canada again. It was perfect <3

haha, and I did not expect Russia to come in like that XD

this was amazing, and you've definitely drawn me to the pairing more xD

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 02:21:13 UTC
Yeah, this was definitely a first ^^; but it was fun, awkwardness aside.

And Matt is magic. He is the son of France and England, after all <3

And Russia was thrown in on a whim, but he worked so well in this fic, I loved that bit.

Yes, come closer to the darkside...especially since you're filling my prompt XD!!!

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moirae January 15 2010, 04:02:52 UTC
D'awwwwww &hearts &hearts

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 13:57:27 UTC
Hehe, thank you <3

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violetzewriter January 15 2010, 05:06:44 UTC
Did you know I have a massage kink? Like, a really big one? It doesn't hurt that since I'm, er, "well-endowed" as well, I get back pains just like that and this fic was delicious. And sexy, we must never forget sexy.

And the shyness. And the fluff. And descriptive kissing, I love me some descriptive kissing. And the sexiness. And then, out of nowhere, RUSSIA. Mmmyes. Between this and the Netherlands/Canada/Ukraine threesome fill I feel very spoiled. Evening = made.

So, uh, yeah, just loving on this forever. And did I mention I found it sexy? Thank you for writing it~

PS While I was reading this I kept thinking, "Hello there, headcanon. You look very Rose-y today~" Aha, so much silliness from me, it must be late.

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 14:01:03 UTC
>////////< Well then, I'm glad I could fill that kink, even though I never knew you had it. I was so afraid this was just terribly cliched, but now I'm much more confident about it.

Shiness and fluff are my specialities <33 AND RUSSIA!

Thanks for the awesome comment, I'm so glad you liked it~

Wow, that's so cute~

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violetzewriter January 15 2010, 19:38:27 UTC
Well, after reading this about half-a-dozen times (bus rides first thing in the morning lend themselves to reading sessions so nicely) I have only one complaint. There are occasional random linebreaks every so often, which is strange but otherwise not anything to worry about.

I noticed~ It's pretty awesome~ I sort of wish I could write fluff, but alas, that has not been my style in a great deal of time.

Which reminds me, what should I be calling you? 'Cause it's been hard to avoid typing your (pen)name, and I don't want to get it wrong.

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 23:37:11 UTC
Wow, six times and only that one complaint? I'd say that was rather good...

Aww, well, you write ...other things.... pretty damn well xD

Rose~ <3

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simplistic_star January 15 2010, 05:23:06 UTC
Oh dear, I really haven't read anything like this from you before, so this fic was probably very nerve racking to write maybe? xD Actually, I don't read these um....detailed..uh, make-out sessions often so I was blushing when I was reading it. And because it was Canada and Ukraine, with their cuteness and all, I had this stupid goofy smile on my face the whole time.

And I agree with smrtypantz, that line was perfect. =D And yeah Russia....I really didn't expect him to come in..and the fact that he didn't smash up the room and all. xDDD At the beginning of it I did wonder if anyone was gonna walk in on them...but I thought it would be America or France or something if it did happen. And lo and behold....Russia... kolkolkol.

Aiyah Matt, luck wasn't on you side today? hahaha....I bet Katya found it cute though, even if she couldn't show it cause Russia came. xDDD what am I saying

Great job on writing this! This fic was smexy and cute at the same time..I guess Canada and Ukraine contribute to that fact too haha. ;D

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 14:07:07 UTC
It was rather awkward to write for sure, but at the same time it's fun to try new things (read: IT WAS AWKWARD AS HELL). But these two are just so cute, I couldn't help it... >////<

Thank you! And yes, it had to be Russia, with his cold, silent fury. Poor Matt ^^; But yeah, I think Katya was happy <3

Thank you so much for the awesome comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed this!

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simplistic_star January 15 2010, 19:06:20 UTC
Oh I forgot to mention, that "H-hi Ukraine" line was the same as the caption for one of my sketches of those two. I found that neat. xD

Russia is definitely scarier with his silent fury LOL. Because Ukraine is related to Russia, Canada's always running into these dangerous situations.

I'm glad that you're writing these good fics for all of us to read. xD now i'm gonna go reread this.

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 23:38:42 UTC
Aww. It really is appropriate for this pairing~

Always. And it will never get old.

>////////< I'm glad you think they're good.

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tanya_tsuki January 15 2010, 05:31:39 UTC
I already told you, this was surprising to see from you XD But I liked it. It was so wonderfully them and RUSSIA XD

Great job <3

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chromatic_coma January 15 2010, 14:02:15 UTC
Yes, it still kind of surprises me that I wrote this but then I have roleplayed worse.... Still, awkwardness aside it was fun!

Thank you~

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