[fic] scarred heart in hand [part ii, chapter iv]

[chromatic_coma]

Title: Scarred Heart in Hand
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma @ animusia
Character(s)/Pairing(s): (in this chapter) Prussia, Austria, Hungary, Spain, Germany, N. Italy, S.Italy ;; Austria/Hungary, Germany/Italy, Spain/Romano,
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Slice-of-Life, Angst
Warning(s): Kissing, Swearing, Homosexual Relationships, Original Character, YMMV

Comments

[nakedfiction]

I'm still reading! And still loving! I'm excited to see how it ends, even though I'm a hopeless romantic and want everyone to be paired off and married, Shakespeare-style! <3

[chromatic_coma]

Haha, sadly I'm not Shakespeare, but I will do my best! Thank you <3

[daemoninwhite]

Ohhhh darl, this is so so so so so cute, every time it comes up in my Flist I get so overexcited. I always, always read this with a cup of hot, black, sweet tea and a couple of shortbread cookies, it's become my ritual. The story makes me feel all fluffy and warm on the inside, and it's not the stereotypical everyone-marries-their-highschool-sweetheart, which I don't like, but there's still sweetness and hope and love and asdfghjkl I am the biggest shipper of FrUK so I really hope that they get back together.

Utterly adorable stuff, I want to join Ludwig and Bella in baby snuggles.

Also, Lovino flipping shit when he couldn't see his baby is beyond adorable and precious. He's such a great mummy daddy.

[chromatic_coma]

Aww, that ritual is so adorable >////< I'm honored, now, that you are enjoying this so much <3

Yes, I wish she was real so I could just snuggle her endlessly! Though, she did "inherit" Lovino's grump

Lovino is such a protective mommy daddy.

[disownmereturns]

“Because you still have feelings for him, and you are a bitter, lonely person in need of some amour.”

“I am not lon-, well, maybe I am lonely, but I’m not bitter!”

“I am not convinced.” Francis deadpanned; Antonio sniggered.

Oho, I really enjoy how you write these three :'3

[chromatic_coma]

Haha, thank you! <33 I try ^^;

[darkinsanity_13]

I'm still reading! I've just never commented ^^U

Anyway, I love how you've depicted all the characters, especially Gilbert. I find myself connecting with him in a lot of ways, particularly the way he hasn't been keeping in contact with his friends and family, then comes back to find he's missed so many opportunities to reconnect, and how he feels guilty about it, but he puts the blame on others to deal with it. Though I admit, part of the reason why this happened with me is that I have no idea what to say. You're really good at capturing those feelings I think, and while he isn't really the focus, I admit I read this fic mostly for Gilbert. I can't wait for the next chapter :3

[chromatic_coma]

Thank you <33

I am so glad that I really managed to get it across, what is happening in Gilbert's mind. He, like you and like myself, doesn't know how to connect with people he doesn't see on a daily basis and he's struggling to try and reconnect even though he is the one who let them go. I would say that he is one of the focuses of this fic, romance aside, because I really think his perspective is common and it was fun to explore. Again, thank you for commenting <33

[chromatic_coma]

Wow, thank you! :)