Not sure which one is the Sue in this one
Title: The Minocite Chronicles
Author: ~Utahraptor~;)
Name: Melissa Chapman
Species: human controller and 'minocite'
Hair: not mentioned
Eyes: not mentioned
Canon Connections: Rachel's best friend
Special Abilities: has 'metalic armor' covering her skin, a cyber eye, and extendable metal claws. But only when she wants to.
Origin: Was once Melissa Chapman before the Yeerks decided to do experiments on her and let her be Controller to this 'minocite' thing they created.
I'm not sure if Melissa is the only Sue here, as all the characters are written so OOC and Rachel in particular shows some disturbing Sue tendencies.
Chapter 1
Reptep 468 of the Gadule pool looked at the creation on the table. This is a breakthrough! The slug thought. I'll surely be promoted for this! Using his host's strong human hands, he picked up the prototype and placed it into a sealed container to carry to Visser 3.
(And what kind of useless creation do you have now.) Visser 3 groaned. "Visser, I guarantee you'll like this one. This here is a robotic parasite."
(And why am I so interested?)
"Because, they are artificial warriors. Unbeatable. They could take the andilite bandits down for good, Visser, sir. All we need is a experimental host and-"
A new controller entered. The one who's host is a middle school principle. "Excuse me Visser, but my host's daughter would be a perfect host. She could no longer get in the way." So I guess the events of book two are mute now and Chapman has no problems with the Yeerks infesting Melissa.
(Excellent idea Esplin 326. Bring her here in three earth hours.)Ah! You stole Ax’s quirk! Give it back! "Yes Visser."
Chapter 2
Three days later…
"I don't know, Melissa's been acting strange lately." Rachel said in the Animorphs usual meeting place, Cassie's barn. "I'm getting kind of worried."
"Yea," Cassie agreed. "I think maybe her 'parents' are getting to her again." They were all thinking about the same thing, just afraid to say it. What, that she’s been made a controller? Strangely enough, it was Jake who suggested it.
"Maybe we should tell her? Why? what if she’s a Sue? Not give her the powers, not after David, but she could give us some information." The others nodded (those who could nod) in agreement. That is, all but Marco. The only sane one, it seems.
"I can't believe it! You are all insane! After what we were just through, you still suggest getting new members?!?!?! This is stupid."
"What Marco? Afraid she'll have a better punch line than you?" Rachel teased.
"No-okay fine. Do what you want. I don't care!" Right. Cause Marco would really just back down like that.
"Okay, that's settled." Jake said. "Rachel, why don't you invite Melissa over." And Jake would totally ignore Marco like that. Cause this is such a good plan. The girl has two Controller parents and she’s acting weird, so the only logical thing to do is tell her everything. Right.
"Sure." Cassie handed her a phone. "Hello? Melissa? It's me, Rachel. Do you wanna' hang out with some of my friends and I at Cassie's? We have something big to tell you."
Little did they know, that was the biggest mistake of their lives. Dun dun dun.
Chapter 3
"So your saying that there are slugs invading the planet? Yea, right. Ha ha, we all had a good laugh. Now what did you really call me about?" The minocite said through Melissa's mouth.
"We're are telling you the truth." Cassie reassured her. "Funny how we believed it when we were told." Well, you had some more compelling evidence.
Marco snorted. "That was because we had a blue dude from another planet in front of us. Maybe space-boy should demorph." Score another one for Marco!
Jake sighed. "For once, I think Marco's right. For once? They always agree. Except on the Batman vs. Superman thing. Ax? Why don't you demorph."
"Yes Prince Jake. Jake, Jah-aaaake."
"Just Jake. No prince. No playing with sounds."
(Yes Prince Jake.) Did I miss the morphing bit?
Melissa pretended to act surprise. "Oh my gosh!" She slurred the words together. She started to scream when Cassie put her hand over her mouth. Huh? Why scream after someone covers your mouth?
"It's okay, he's on our side." Cassie soothed.
They explained about the construction site, Elfangor, and everything, Melissa was shocked to here that her parents were both controllers, but she seemed to handle it better then they thought.
"Well," Melissa said finally, "I better be going. Don't worry, I won't talk to anyone about this." Wow. How anti-climactic. ‘Earth is being invaded. Okay, I think I’ll go do my homework now.’
Chapter 9
Rachel longed. Longed? Longed for what? Her grizzly morph? Minocite001 dodged and kicked her in the back. Rachel stumbled slightly but was soon back in control.
She let out a not too graceful kick that managed to swipe Melissa across the face. Melissa held her bloody nose. Why not morph and bite her nose off? Or head, or whatever. I’m not too picky when it comes to Sues.
"You'll pay for that!" she extended to sharp metal claws attached to her hand. She scratched Rachel across the arm. Cat fight!
"Ow!" Rachel cried.
"What's wrong Rachel? You're not cowering in some other form." 'Melissa' mocked. Sue makes a good point. *gasp* Never thought I’d say that. But why didn’t Rachel morph?
With lightning speed, she knocked Rachel to the ground and had her at gunpoint. "I win." Where did the gun come from?
"No." Rachel said flatly. She swung her fist and knocked the Dracon A second ago it was a gun. out of her hand. With a dive/roll, Rachel had the gun. She pressed her knee into the creature's chest. "I think you played the wrong card." So now they’re playing cards. Interesting. For thirty seconds they just glared at each other.
"Well?"Minocite001 finally asked, "what are you waiting for." Rachel stood up.
"I won't do it. I won't kill Melissa too." She tossed the gun aside. Right. That’s very IC for Rachel to throw away her only weapon.
Melissa smirked. "It is unwise to lower your defenses!" She kicked Rachel in the chin, causing her to fall back.
"That's it!" She cried grabbing a crowbar, she ran ready to strike toward Melissa. Because crowbars are more BF-friendly than Dracon/guns.
Minocite001 just smirked. It was over in a mater of seconds. Rachel was running toward her. When she was to close to stop in time, Melissa extended a single long claw.
Rachel's eyes went wide in terror has she impaled it. She impaled the claw? Or she was impaled on it?
Minocite001 looked directly into her eyes. "Game. Over." Oh, right. This is why Rachel didn’t morph. The Sue had to kill her at the end.
Author: ~Utahraptor~;)
Name: Melissa Chapman
Species: human controller and 'minocite'
Hair: not mentioned
Eyes: not mentioned
Canon Connections: Rachel's best friend
Special Abilities: has 'metalic armor' covering her skin, a cyber eye, and extendable metal claws. But only when she wants to.
Origin: Was once Melissa Chapman before the Yeerks decided to do experiments on her and let her be Controller to this 'minocite' thing they created.
I'm not sure if Melissa is the only Sue here, as all the characters are written so OOC and Rachel in particular shows some disturbing Sue tendencies.
Chapter 1
Reptep 468 of the Gadule pool looked at the creation on the table. This is a breakthrough! The slug thought. I'll surely be promoted for this! Using his host's strong human hands, he picked up the prototype and placed it into a sealed container to carry to Visser 3.
(And what kind of useless creation do you have now.) Visser 3 groaned. "Visser, I guarantee you'll like this one. This here is a robotic parasite."
(And why am I so interested?)
"Because, they are artificial warriors. Unbeatable. They could take the andilite bandits down for good, Visser, sir. All we need is a experimental host and-"
A new controller entered. The one who's host is a middle school principle. "Excuse me Visser, but my host's daughter would be a perfect host. She could no longer get in the way." So I guess the events of book two are mute now and Chapman has no problems with the Yeerks infesting Melissa.
(Excellent idea Esplin 326. Bring her here in three earth hours.)Ah! You stole Ax’s quirk! Give it back! "Yes Visser."
Chapter 2
Three days later…
"I don't know, Melissa's been acting strange lately." Rachel said in the Animorphs usual meeting place, Cassie's barn. "I'm getting kind of worried."
"Yea," Cassie agreed. "I think maybe her 'parents' are getting to her again." They were all thinking about the same thing, just afraid to say it. What, that she’s been made a controller? Strangely enough, it was Jake who suggested it.
"Maybe we should tell her? Why? what if she’s a Sue? Not give her the powers, not after David, but she could give us some information." The others nodded (those who could nod) in agreement. That is, all but Marco. The only sane one, it seems.
"I can't believe it! You are all insane! After what we were just through, you still suggest getting new members?!?!?! This is stupid."
"What Marco? Afraid she'll have a better punch line than you?" Rachel teased.
"No-okay fine. Do what you want. I don't care!" Right. Cause Marco would really just back down like that.
"Okay, that's settled." Jake said. "Rachel, why don't you invite Melissa over." And Jake would totally ignore Marco like that. Cause this is such a good plan. The girl has two Controller parents and she’s acting weird, so the only logical thing to do is tell her everything. Right.
"Sure." Cassie handed her a phone. "Hello? Melissa? It's me, Rachel. Do you wanna' hang out with some of my friends and I at Cassie's? We have something big to tell you."
Little did they know, that was the biggest mistake of their lives. Dun dun dun.
Chapter 3
"So your saying that there are slugs invading the planet? Yea, right. Ha ha, we all had a good laugh. Now what did you really call me about?" The minocite said through Melissa's mouth.
"We're are telling you the truth." Cassie reassured her. "Funny how we believed it when we were told." Well, you had some more compelling evidence.
Marco snorted. "That was because we had a blue dude from another planet in front of us. Maybe space-boy should demorph." Score another one for Marco!
Jake sighed. "For once, I think Marco's right. For once? They always agree. Except on the Batman vs. Superman thing. Ax? Why don't you demorph."
"Yes Prince Jake. Jake, Jah-aaaake."
"Just Jake. No prince. No playing with sounds."
(Yes Prince Jake.) Did I miss the morphing bit?
Melissa pretended to act surprise. "Oh my gosh!" She slurred the words together. She started to scream when Cassie put her hand over her mouth. Huh? Why scream after someone covers your mouth?
"It's okay, he's on our side." Cassie soothed.
They explained about the construction site, Elfangor, and everything, Melissa was shocked to here that her parents were both controllers, but she seemed to handle it better then they thought.
"Well," Melissa said finally, "I better be going. Don't worry, I won't talk to anyone about this." Wow. How anti-climactic. ‘Earth is being invaded. Okay, I think I’ll go do my homework now.’
Chapter 9
Rachel longed. Longed? Longed for what? Her grizzly morph? Minocite001 dodged and kicked her in the back. Rachel stumbled slightly but was soon back in control.
She let out a not too graceful kick that managed to swipe Melissa across the face. Melissa held her bloody nose. Why not morph and bite her nose off? Or head, or whatever. I’m not too picky when it comes to Sues.
"You'll pay for that!" she extended to sharp metal claws attached to her hand. She scratched Rachel across the arm. Cat fight!
"Ow!" Rachel cried.
"What's wrong Rachel? You're not cowering in some other form." 'Melissa' mocked. Sue makes a good point. *gasp* Never thought I’d say that. But why didn’t Rachel morph?
With lightning speed, she knocked Rachel to the ground and had her at gunpoint. "I win." Where did the gun come from?
"No." Rachel said flatly. She swung her fist and knocked the Dracon A second ago it was a gun. out of her hand. With a dive/roll, Rachel had the gun. She pressed her knee into the creature's chest. "I think you played the wrong card." So now they’re playing cards. Interesting. For thirty seconds they just glared at each other.
"Well?"Minocite001 finally asked, "what are you waiting for." Rachel stood up.
"I won't do it. I won't kill Melissa too." She tossed the gun aside. Right. That’s very IC for Rachel to throw away her only weapon.
Melissa smirked. "It is unwise to lower your defenses!" She kicked Rachel in the chin, causing her to fall back.
"That's it!" She cried grabbing a crowbar, she ran ready to strike toward Melissa. Because crowbars are more BF-friendly than Dracon/guns.
Minocite001 just smirked. It was over in a mater of seconds. Rachel was running toward her. When she was to close to stop in time, Melissa extended a single long claw.
Rachel's eyes went wide in terror has she impaled it. She impaled the claw? Or she was impaled on it?
Minocite001 looked directly into her eyes. "Game. Over." Oh, right. This is why Rachel didn’t morph. The Sue had to kill her at the end.