Fic! Marco/Tobias

[lizzypaul]

So the idea just came to me. Weird, as I'm really not a Tobias fan. But it's the first Animorph fic I've written in awhile. Constructive crit. would be great

Comments

[felinephoenix]

Oooh, what's with the all the Marco/Tobias lately? Not that I'm complaining, I've always liked it, and it never gets written...I'm just curious. Anyway, I liked this, but I do think it was definitely a bit rushed near the end -- maybe it's just me, but while I could see Marco forcing/manipulating/whatevering Tobias to morph to human and all that, the exclamations of love seemed a little...off. I think maybe you should've put something near the beginning of the fic to hint at it, perhaps, though I did like the start of the story, especially with the Tobias-siting website. Other than that, though, it was pretty in-character, and I liked it a lot. Write more, please! (And can I please add it to my site, which I swear I'll get off my ass and update someday?)

[lizzypaul]

Oh sure, I'd love to be archived somewhere .

Yes, the ending is rushed, and I'll probably re-do it. I'm horrible at endings, they're always too abrupt. Don't know why.

Thanks!

[oximore]

God I still can't believe my teenage books finish like this but hell, I love your fic, and I'm not usually a Marco/Tobias fan! :D

Great!