Wow, I haven't had the urge to stay up and finish a fic story in a while. This is so well written I really don't know where to start. The plot is great, has tender moments, slower scenes to build up the story and let the characters shine. But when there's conflict, it's well thought out and very intense. Great pace. The characters are so believable and you just want to root for them all. I've always found it hard to write multiple characters while keeping all of them interesting and balanced, but you've managed so well. Kudos! I also love how logical and precise your writing is, it works really well for action plots. Thank you for telling such a good story <3 I can't believe I've become one of those readers but I - I want more lol. I wish Kris and Baek had more development for their love story, and I really want to know what happens to everyone as they continue west! Oh and not sure how sad your original ending was, but this ending works wonderfully ^^ Hope is a great thing to leave the readers with I gotta say, especially after so many intense moments (mentally taking notes lol).
*squishes you* You are so sweet and this comment is AMAZING <3333 I should give credit for the plot to Amy because her prompt was already pretty detailed and gave me so much to work with - coming up with a general storyline was a breeze after that!
I'm glad the pacing didn't throw you off - I know it's all moving rather fast but I prefer to spend more time on a few key scenes instead of adding more details where it will just slow down the story. That might not make it an easy or elegant read but I'm relieved that seemed to work for you here!
Unfortunately the chances of me writing more in this verse are nil but let's pretend Krisbaek find their happy ever-after ;)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND COMMENTING im gonna buy you a drink (i'll just need to figure out how)
(in the original ending... well, basically, everybody died. because i'm a debbie downer)
<33 I'm glad your friend talked you out of the original ending then, we all have much to thank her :D everyone dies is an ok ending too but this is just more satisfying for readers lol (selfishly).
This is so well written I really don't know where to start.
The plot is great, has tender moments, slower scenes to build up the story and let the characters shine. But when there's conflict, it's well thought out and very intense. Great pace.
The characters are so believable and you just want to root for them all. I've always found it hard to write multiple characters while keeping all of them interesting and balanced, but you've managed so well. Kudos!
I also love how logical and precise your writing is, it works really well for action plots.
Thank you for telling such a good story <3 I can't believe I've become one of those readers but I - I want more lol. I wish Kris and Baek had more development for their love story, and I really want to know what happens to everyone as they continue west!
Oh and not sure how sad your original ending was, but this ending works wonderfully ^^ Hope is a great thing to leave the readers with I gotta say, especially after so many intense moments (mentally taking notes lol).
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I should give credit for the plot to Amy because her prompt was already pretty detailed and gave me so much to work with - coming up with a general storyline was a breeze after that!
I'm glad the pacing didn't throw you off - I know it's all moving rather fast but I prefer to spend more time on a few key scenes instead of adding more details where it will just slow down the story. That might not make it an easy or elegant read but I'm relieved that seemed to work for you here!
Unfortunately the chances of me writing more in this verse are nil but let's pretend Krisbaek find their happy ever-after ;)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND COMMENTING im gonna buy you a drink (i'll just need to figure out how)
(in the original ending... well, basically, everybody died. because i'm a debbie downer)
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I'm glad your friend talked you out of the original ending then, we all have much to thank her :D everyone dies is an ok ending too but this is just more satisfying for readers lol (selfishly).
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