The suspense, the desperate need for survival, the deep love Kris has for his son Sehun and how he’s there reassuring the kid even though Sehun insist he’s not a kid anymore, the dynamics of the group and all the relationships, AND THE ZOMBIE EMOJIS AS SCENE DIVIDERSSSSS (¬º-°)¬
Kris and Sehun’s relationship was perfect. How Kris deeply worried for his son and Sehun tried to act all invincible and adult-like, but he’s still just a kid deep down. "You can't ask me to just go on without you." Sehun's voice cracks. /ugly sobs
Then Baekhyun-the badass katana girl-appears along with her sidekick Chanyeol who is just such an insecure and stuttering pile of cute <33 "Chanyeol's my best friend but I swear he has the survival instincts of a beanbag. LOL
I have to say I like how you wrote fem!exo Like, I loved every single character so much, but especially Baek, Lu, and Kyungsoo!! They were such badasses and leaders in their own right. The whole group contributed and helped and had their own equally important roles.
A woman steps out - short, with black hair cut into a jagged bob, a pair of wide eyes framed by thick brows and uneven bangs. She's dressed in black, her pants tucked into worn combat boots and a thin shirt looking frayed around the seams. I LEGIT SCREAMED WHEN I READ THIS BC I IMMEDIATELY KNEW WHO IT WAS <333 Also, Ksoo being a bad cook LOL
Luhan is standing right behind him, rifle slung over her chest - her right hand never wandering too far from the trigger. It's no longer aimed at him or Sehun, but the blonde keeps her eyes pinned on Kris, almost daring him to make a wrong move. FEM!LU IS SO BADASS
Minseok nods in Luhan’s direction. “My wife can shoot a fly from a distance of 30 feet, and we all count on her to keep the compound safe.”
Luhan’s cheeks turn pink at the compliment, and she sends a wink at her husband, clearly pleased. OMG RIP MY HEART OUT
KRIS AND BAEKHYUN’S NIGHTLY TALKS AND THEM GETTING CLOSER tho I admit the sexy scene felt rushed, but maybe it's just bc of the time skips. I enjoyed it nonetheless :D
That ending just about ENDED ME. First, JONGIN FINDING A DOG AND SMILING FOR THE FIRST TIME IN FOREVER AND THEN THEY HAVE TO KILL HER /SOBS/ And then they didn’t and I was sobbing again bc they’re all such soft-hearted fools. And then, the rogues come and it all turns to shit! AND I AM SCREAMING AGAIN BC I DID NOT WANT ANYONE ELSE TO DIE BUT IT HAPPENS AND OH GOD WHYYYYYYYY
Bless you, whoever you are. You’ve made my morning very exciting with this fic <3
"OH GOD WHYYYYYYYY" was pretty much what I was thinking as I was writing it. I DID NOT KNOW I COULD BE SO CRUEL.
Still this was hella fun to write even with all these elements I usually shy away from (action?? character death? girl exo?? angst??) but most of all I am so proud i managed to stay away from my usual cracktastic route and write a legitimately sad fic for once. THANK YOU AMY FOR THIS EXCELLENT PROMPT IT WAS A++++
<3 I hope I'll have to honor to write something for you again in the future.
LOL the things one discovers as one writes xD I'm so glad you had fun with this, bc I also had fun coming up with the prompt heheh Like I said, A+++ job and it's me who would be honored if you wrote for me again <333
The suspense, the desperate need for survival, the deep love Kris has for his son Sehun and how he’s there reassuring the kid even though Sehun insist he’s not a kid anymore, the dynamics of the group and all the relationships, AND THE ZOMBIE EMOJIS AS SCENE DIVIDERSSSSS (¬º-°)¬
Kris and Sehun’s relationship was perfect. How Kris deeply worried for his son and Sehun tried to act all invincible and adult-like, but he’s still just a kid deep down.
"You can't ask me to just go on without you." Sehun's voice cracks.
/ugly sobs
Then Baekhyun-the badass katana girl-appears along with her sidekick Chanyeol who is just such an insecure and stuttering pile of cute <33
"Chanyeol's my best friend but I swear he has the survival instincts of a beanbag.
LOL
I have to say I like how you wrote fem!exo Like, I loved every single character so much, but especially Baek, Lu, and Kyungsoo!! They were such badasses and leaders in their own right. The whole group contributed and helped and had their own equally important roles.
A woman steps out - short, with black hair cut into a jagged bob, a pair of wide eyes framed by thick brows and uneven bangs. She's dressed in black, her pants tucked into worn combat boots and a thin shirt looking frayed around the seams.
I LEGIT SCREAMED WHEN I READ THIS BC I IMMEDIATELY KNEW WHO IT WAS <333 Also, Ksoo being a bad cook LOL
Luhan is standing right behind him, rifle slung over her chest - her right hand never wandering too far from the trigger. It's no longer aimed at him or Sehun, but the blonde keeps her eyes pinned on Kris, almost daring him to make a wrong move.
FEM!LU IS SO BADASS
Minseok nods in Luhan’s direction. “My wife can shoot a fly from a distance of 30 feet, and we all count on her to keep the compound safe.”
Luhan’s cheeks turn pink at the compliment, and she sends a wink at her husband, clearly pleased.
OMG RIP MY HEART OUT
JONNNNGGIIIIIINNNNNNN~~~
JOONMYUNNNNNNNNNNNN~~~~
CHENTAOOOOOOOOO~~~
HOLY CRAP CHANYEOL’S SISTER
KRIS AND BAEKHYUN’S NIGHTLY TALKS AND THEM GETTING CLOSER tho I admit the sexy scene felt rushed, but maybe it's just bc of the time skips. I enjoyed it nonetheless :D
That ending just about ENDED ME. First, JONGIN FINDING A DOG AND SMILING FOR THE FIRST TIME IN FOREVER AND THEN THEY HAVE TO KILL HER /SOBS/ And then they didn’t and I was sobbing again bc they’re all such soft-hearted fools. And then, the rogues come and it all turns to shit! AND I AM SCREAMING AGAIN BC I DID NOT WANT ANYONE ELSE TO DIE BUT IT HAPPENS AND OH GOD WHYYYYYYYY
Bless you, whoever you are. You’ve made my morning very exciting with this fic <3
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Still this was hella fun to write even with all these elements I usually shy away from (action?? character death? girl exo?? angst??) but most of all I am so proud i managed to stay away from my usual cracktastic route and write a legitimately sad fic for once.
THANK YOU AMY FOR THIS EXCELLENT PROMPT IT WAS A++++
<3 I hope I'll have to honor to write something for you again in the future.
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I'm so glad you had fun with this, bc I also had fun coming up with the prompt heheh Like I said, A+++ job and it's me who would be honored if you wrote for me again <333
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