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anim22

Please Forgive me - Chapter 6

May 23, 2008 19:46

Title: Please, forgive me
Length: 6/?
Author: Anim22
Rating: Pg (Pg - R)
Genre: Drama, angst, AU- m-preg

Pairing: Jae/Yunho,Jae/Shiwon, Yoosu.
Summary: Jaejoong had the perfect life, and one day everything was destroyed. Now, he wants to go on with his life but Yunho is still looking for him. Then Choi Shiwon appears to sweep Jae off his feet. Who is ( Read more... )

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anim22 May 24 2008, 01:35:45 UTC

I think it looks fast paced because this is actually two chapters in one. But I guess I really wanted to introduced Siwon already since everyone was asking when he was going to show up. About Siwon, you never judge a person the first time you see them^^. First impressions can be wrong. Siwon is a mysterious guy. Just wait for the next update.

amouralamer May 24 2008, 01:41:48 UTC

Poor Jaejoong. What's going to happen to them? And yeah, the name Yunho has always wanted to name his daughter is Ji Yool. If you type 'Dbsk barbies' into the Youtube search engine you can watch the interview where he mentions it. The boys are given dolls and asked to dress them in the style of the girl they would like to marry.

anim22 May 24 2008, 02:25:14 UTC

Thank you, I knew that there was a video about that. Don't worry about Jae. He is going to have Shiwon now and Yunho is coming soon.

evilgirl89 May 24 2008, 01:51:34 UTC

Yes more Yoosu!

And Yunho said he like the name Jung Ji Yool if he had a daughter one day in the show where they play with dolls.

anim22 May 24 2008, 02:26:53 UTC

I love the name^^. More Yoosu, yes. Although their story is just as sad as Jaeho. We'll see. Thank you for reading.

kattan69 May 24 2008, 02:05:04 UTC

Oh..I'm so excited when I saw your posting. Got to immediately read this.

Glad you bring the story faster...hate long-winded stories...I always say 'cut the chase and go straight to the point'.

Anyway, I'm glad Yunho is suffering and that he is not 'touching' that girl. But how is he going to get out of the marriage. Is the baby truly his or someone else? Did they do a DNA test on it to confirm. Funny thing is I don't want that child to be Yunho's. It will feel gratified if that is the case.

As for Jae, it is time he met Siwon. At least he can have another chance of love, although it would be impossible to replace Yunho. When will Jae forgive Yunho. Unless Yunho sacrifice himself to save Jae from a terrible fate, then maybe Jae will forgive him...??

Girl, thanks for writing and really can't wait to read the next chapter where Yunho finally confront Jae.

About Yoosu, maybe you can write it later after you finish this one.

anim22 May 24 2008, 02:33:50 UTC

Glad that you are excited^^.

HAHAa, yeah that's what I thought. Besides I want to write jealous Yunho as soon as possible. The answer about that I can't say, but yeah Yunho only loves Jae and he wasn't going to betray him again. Yes, that's exactly what I was thinking. Although there is the possibility that Jae will fall for Siwon. He could never replace what he had with Yunho. He was his first love and they grew up together.

I have no idea how Jae is going to forgive Yunho. If he forgives him. Ummm that's a good option.

Yunho is going to raise hell for Siwon. I wanted to write Yoosu as a side story but we'll see.

Thanks for reading^^.

chloe1910 May 24 2008, 02:37:00 UTC

I totally agree with what kattan69 said!! Since Yunho felt kinda uneasy about his son..he should go for a DNA test.. I'm betting that the son is not his cause somehow, Yunho can't really feel the connection with his son...

anim22 May 24 2008, 02:49:58 UTC

Ummmm, I can't answer that since the next chapter will reveal everything. Mybe Yunho got a divorce...there are many possibilities^^.

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chloe1910 May 24 2008, 02:34:56 UTC

Of course we want to know more about the Yoosu story!!! Pwease??

I'm glad to see that Yunho is suffering as much as Jae(though it break my hearts to say so)...Gulp..the Jaewon has met..ooh..I can foresee much "cross-fire" between the Jaewon in future...

anim22 May 24 2008, 02:39:51 UTC

Yes, I am thinking about writing more about Yoosu. I also adore the pair. Yeah, Yunho should suffer, after all everything is his fault. The way that Jae and Siwon meet is funny. You will see^^. But I can't wait to write jealous Yunho, you know the best revenge is indifference.

chloe1910 May 24 2008, 08:32:12 UTC

Yes..I can't wait to see jealous!Ho. It's about time he received a dose of his own medicine, though he didn't mean to betray Jae. Here, I blame Hye Bin alone cause she plotted to seduce Yunho while he was drunked! But of course, I blame Yunho for being an ass towards Jae before that. As for lying to Jaejoong, I don't like people lying but given the situation, if I'm in Yunho's situation and when you love someone so much, I think I might have reacted the same. I might have lied to Jaejoong for fear of losing him...

Oooooh. I can't wait for Siwon to start wooing Jae and please make sure that Yunho witness it. Yes, yes, Yunho torture time....

PS anim22: I bet my ass that the baby is not Yunho. Cause most people would feel a special connection to their child the moment they saw him/her.
Ps2: I hope you'll protect my ass yeah, anim22

anim22 May 25 2008, 17:06:35 UTC

Fist of all. Let me stop laughing before I answer you^^.

Oh he is going to hate Jae's new in-dependency. And of course his friendship with Siwon. I hope I can make Yunho likable by the end of the fic, although it's going to be really difficult since he is such a jerk, but he will learn. Yes, I think that I would have done the same, I mean not telling the truth but at the end the truth is out sooner or later.

Siwon is going to change Jaejoong's views. He is just like Jaejoong but in a different way.

Ps: I can't answer that(Just smile^^)

Ps2: HAHAHAHAHAHA
Don't worry it's well protected.(being vague)