Darkness, solitude and sadness were the only thing that could be observed in the neighborhoods of that majestic and impotent gothic castle; but near that place, by the small forest that limited with that zone, you could appreciate a light of which it was possible to feel hope, joy and happiness. That light came from a young man, of clear blond hair
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There are quite a few grammar mistakes but it didn't draw me away from the meanings in this story. Great job, your writing is very deep. ^^*
I'd love to see how good of a writer you are in your first language. :]
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if you know spanish or understand it i can give ou one of my stories in spnaish for you to read it
and thanks for commenting
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Sure, I understand Spanish pretty well. ^^* Thanks~
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serue800@aol.com
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i'm going to send you the stories right now <3
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And wow congrats on winning a literature challenge with them :o~
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