Fic - Jensen/Jared - The Past Never Stays There - chapter 3/14

[angels3]

 Title : The Past Never Stays There - Chapter 3/14

Author : angels3  aka Angela

Beta : munimula - who is the best beta ever and any mistakes left are so mine, and there will probably be a plenty as I had to rework some things after she sent it back to me.  (sorry muni there was a couple of places I just didn't know how to fix so I left it.)

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[witchy78]

First, first, first ! OK, now I have to go read that new chapter !!

[angels3]

Congratulations. I'm happy your excited.

[lovetheguys]

That chapter was excellent--and the shark attack was real! Whew! Scary as hell! I am so looking forward to reading what comes next! Love, Robin

[angels3]

Unlike Jensen Shark week is a big draw at my house. We've always lived near the water and it just makes sense to be prepared (not that I think you can ever be that prepared). The kids pile on my bed until it's time for them to go to their own and watch.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter will take a little longer since my whole vacation has been spent painting rooms instead of writing.

[witchy78]

Of course I am excited, I love that verse. That new chapter was very interesting 'cause we finally know who that Killan is. The scene on the couch when Jensen's telling his story to Jared is really cute. I love the way Jared holds Jensen. And I really liked that part : "Jared realized just how much Jensen trusted him and loved him to tell him something that someone Jensen viewed as a brother didn't even know". Chris like a brother to Jensen, I so wish it is true in RL ;o)
Thanks for this new chapter and now I'm going to bed, 'cause here in Paris, it is almost midnight... Bye.

[angels3]

Goodnight. I hope you have wonderful Jensen and Jared dreams.

Kylan is not nice at all and a little bent.

Jared and Jensen snuggling makes me happy beyond words so I try to include it whenever I can.

Chris gets told most things but not something Jensen knows will get him sent to prison doing 20 to life.

[sn_24lover]

Wow, what a chapter. And you knew the actual Mark attacked by the shark, another wow. I am in love with this story and cannot wait for more. And I am glad to hear the the real Mark is doing well and still surfing. Very cool!!!

[angels3]

I knew what I wanted Kylan to do as far as jobs and I was stressing over how to have them be introduced, and it was like duh!!!

Sometimes I'm slow like that, if it's obvious it passes right under my radar. I haven't seen Celi in years now, it makes me sad because I loved her to death. She retired from the doc. office she worked at and started working with the school system closer to her house. Like I said though I was close to her not really Mark but since her and my mom worked together I got the play by play.

I'm glad you enjoy the story. I'm going back to work tomorrow so I'll get some work done on chapter four during my lunch. That's when I write the most.

Thanks for reading and letting me know you like it.

[sn_24lover]

LOL, I am just as slow at the obvious sometimes, so I know how you feel. And I love the fact that you write on you lunch break at work. Very naughty!! Been meaning to ask, do you mind if I friend you for the updates?

[angels3]

Nope don't mind at all. Friend away and I'll click you back.

[sunset_dark]

Yay! A new chapter *big grin* Poor Jensen, what a difficult time he's had but Jared is being understanding and will stick by him all the way I'm sure. Look forward to the next chapter. best wishes <3 xx

[angels3]

Thank you, and of course Jared will stick by him. Jared is not a happy camper right now though he's really close to homicidal if only he could get his hands on Kylan.

I'm starting four tomorrow, I go back to work and I seem to get most of my writing done on my lunch.