Fic - Jensen/Jared - When Things Come Crashing Down - chapter 8/14

[angels3]

 Title : When Things Come Crashing Down chapter 8/14
Author : angels3  aka Angela

Beta : munimula - I played with it after, she sent it back so any mistakes are mine mine mine.

Word Count : 5971

Pairing : Jensen/Jared (very soon)

Supporting Characters : Eric, Kim, Sera, Mike, Tom, Chris, Steve, Chad

Disclaimers :

Comments

[layne67]

I love the image of Jensen as the older, complacent dog and Jared as the bouncing, younger one! The two of them snugggling together is so sweet and a pissed-off Jared is a sight to behold indeed. And they final-ly kissed yay!

Thank you

[angels3]

You know in all the interviews when Jared is being adorkable that's what I see that damn cartoon.

I love the snuggling. If it were up to me they would never leave the bed.

Yea can you see all 6'4" or 5" of pissed of Jared in your face, I'd pee my britches. Where I think he is very laid back, I picture him as very scary when you've crossed the line.

Did they kiss? Really? I'm gonna have to do something about that.

[c_ntbucket]

God I hate you, hate you so much that I want to hug you and punch you all at the same time.
Excellent chapter, and I love the way you have written Chad. Never really a fan of Chad but you kinda changed my mind so well done lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

*hides behind muni*

[angels3]

Um okay thank you, I'm leaving town now, no forwarding address.

I've never been a fan of Chad either, my oldest is. Me not so much. I've read several stories that have him as a douche and several that have him as a loveable douche and then several that have him damn cool.

I don't really know why he has turned out the way he has here but I like it, course Jared might not when he gets hold of him.

Nine is with muni, she's been on vaca. but I think she's back tomorrow.

Glad you liked it enough to want to punch me I'm assuming for how I ended it? Wait till chapter ten I think I may be real evil.

Re: *hides behind muni*

[c_ntbucket]

You better hide behind Muni Lol. I was really starting to get into the chapter, they kissed and then nothing cos you thought you'd be so smart and end it there. But at least it is not some bad cliff hanger life someone not waking up or something Lol.
*Hugs you because you always leave excellent cliff hangers*
Chad seams like a nice guy here, not somebody that wants to do every thing that moves(not that he's really got the chance lol.)And Jared's got a few things he need to explain to Chad and Jensen thats for sure.

Are you going to make me cry at the end of chapter ten?

Re: *hides behind muni*

[angels3]

Well I think she might threaten to kill me if the chapters get any longer. We're talking anywhere from 5,000 to 6,500 words for the last three.

I try not to be too evil with the cliffies.

We'll I'm not so sure he doesn't want to do anything that moves but as you say not a hell of a lot of chances there unless you know Mike wants to participate.

Chad's gonna tear him a new one when he finds out he's okay, Jensen not sure how he's going to feel he's not talking to me right now. Something about not being happy about where I left chapter nine either.

No, we know what's happening just not all the guys do.

[ymmy12]

i can not believe you are so cruel to end it there!
bad author!

more please

*smacks self*

[angels3]

bad Angie. Sorry, *grins* not really but does it make you feel better to know that nine was sent to my beta this afternoon?

:) So you still don't love me? Damn!

[munibunny]

Whoa! You are so amazingly speedy with the editing... You already know I love this... Think I totally have a hard-on for that Rescue Team.

Love ya!

*throws kisses*

[angels3]

Love you too and thanks for keeping me straight.

Well since I hate them, I try to get them out of the way.

Not to mention you make it easy to follow what you think needs fixing it doesn't take much to do it once I whine about it.

I'm glad you like the rescue team, they've actually played a much bigger part than I originally planned, but that was because I wasn't sure what to write them doing. They seemed to have taken on their own voices as I've gone.

[debarouchi]

Ok i hate it that you left it there and I love it that you gave us the first kiss. Cant wait to see what the reaction will be to this. The voices you have given each character are great, they are all really well written.

Thank you

[angels3]

I'm glad you like how their written, I was really angsty about the rescue team and going back and forth but muni liked it so I stuck with it. People seemed to approve. I didn't think I would be able to give the rescue team voices but they seem to have snuck in my head and shouted what needs to be written.

It's bad to admit to voices in you head isn't it. Even in Harry Potter they say so. Hmmmmm.. padded room here I come.

I'm glad your enjoying, and um the kiss, nine will expound but ten may get a little more interesting...

Re: Thank you

[debarouchi]

Can you give me a hint on when we might be seeing the next chapter ;)

Re: Thank you

[angels3]

Rescue team hits the trail again, and there may be more something something going on. Ten I can tell you will have the rescue team freaked.
I havn't started that chapter yet but I know where I want it to go.