Fic - Jensen/Jared - When Things Come Crashing Down chapter 3/14

[angels3]

Title : When Things Come Crashing Down chapter 3/14

Author : angels3  aka Angela

Beta : munimula - I played with it after she sent it back so any mistakes are mine mine mine.

Word Count : 1145

Pairing : Jensen/Jared (very soon)

Supporting Characters : Eric, Kim, Sera, Mike, Tom, Chris, Steve, Chad

Disclaimers : They

Comments

[2sexyboys]

Poor Jared, now that would be embarrassing to be found dead with your pants around your ankles LOL Waiting for more.

But really

[angels3]

isn't that usually the case. Just as soon as you go to the bathroom the phone rings, the kids come hollering, best friends wake up from plane crashes. They never show you the proper etiquette when leave to go to the bathroom.

Glad you liked it. I hope to have a much longer chapter done by the end of the week sometime.

Re: But really

[relativity1953]

Flight of the Phoenix moment?

[c_ntbucket]

Yay update, god i love this darl.
Cant wait till next chapter cos then they'll both now there alive nad then eventually they'll admit they love each other lol.
This is excellent, makes me want to jump up and down lol.

Thank you

[angels3]

I'm glad your still finding it interesting. I want to get to the relationship stuff too but I didn't want to just chunk it in there without some kind of build up. The next chapter will be longer as it will have the rest of Jensen and Jared's day one and then start into day two for the rescue teams.

[munibunny]

Wow! You posted already! Amazing!

I like what you did... This chapter is really good, babe. I like Jared being resourceful and worried at the same time. And now, Jensen is awake! Yay! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks

[angels3]

I felt I needed to be productive since as usual I can't go to sleep damn it. Yea I looked at what you had questioned and then tried to find some way to make it more understandable since you know my brain seems to skip important shit.

Yep he's awake so at least Jared won't be talking to himself course he may wish he was unconcious one soon if for no reason but to hide from his own head.

Thanks for working on it for me. :)

[layne67]

It makes me so happy that the first name that Jensen called out when he regained conciousness was Jared. And I'm so glad that Jared appeared to be a take-charge sort of person. They were in for a tough time indeed, what with problems of food ( was there any around? ) and their injuries.

Thanks

[angels3]

Jensen just needed a minute to regroup but of course the first name he's going to call is Jared's.

Jared really had no choice about the take charge but he never has seemed to me to be a shrinking violet. He's always struck me as a happy go lucky kid but he also comes across with alot of self confidence so while I think like most people he's terrified, keeping busy and alive just makes sense.

Food you say? What you can't live on love alone? (even if they don't know about it yet) Well maybe since Jen is awake Jared will spend a little more time looking.

Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback it makes me happy.

[lostandalone22]

Nice chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Thank you

[angels3]

I already have a little done, I'm off tomorrow so I'm going to try to knock it out then.