Escape Chapter 5

[angelpi74]

Well this came out quicker than expected - and this one is a lot better than the last one.

I hope you like it and I really appreciate all the comments being left. Enjoy.

Comments

[newfoundlover]

that was great, loved the ending, could totally see House doing the eye brow thingy, hahaha :D

[angelpi74]

Thanks ;) I wanted to have House do the eye brow thing - it is so him!

[dil_deal]

Wow, fast update!
I wonder what House could have said to that girl that she had help him.
House's place....? Promising :)

[angelpi74]

It was fast wasn't it - I must admit if flowed out faster than expected. As for what House said to Maggie - well he said ....
nah can't do it just yet, but soon

[blue_crystal_9]

Haha, I love Maggie. :)

Absolutely awesome chapter! I can't wait for more! :)

[angelpi74]

She is cool isn't she - I wanted to have her as a typical Aussie girl, caring, loveing and straight to the point. Not much room for bullshit with her!! Glad you liked the chapter, the next one is being worked on at the moment.

[sgr11]

Lovely update! I'm really curious what House is going to say to Allison, what he said to Maggie to make her go along with him, and what exactly happened between him and Allison to make her go fleeing... and make him go chasing to fix her! In some ways, House and Cameron almost seemed to have swapped emotional places! I'm looking forward to your next installment very much!

Right now at that moment she felt so many mixed emotions; it was like travelling the rollercoaster blindfolded, unable to see the corner was coming up or if a sudden drop was about to take the riders in for a double three-sixty loop in the air. Hurt, anger, relief, sadness, elation all ran through her system; all nice little contradictions if there was ever one.
Very nice...liked this imagery very much!

Nice job! Keep writing! ;)