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angelita26

WC BB 2013: The Lost Boys

Sep 12, 2013 07:52

Title: The Lost Boys ( Read more... )

hurt/comfort: injury, au, fandom: white collar, character: sara, verse: stand by me, hurt/comfort: broken bone, event: wcbb 2013, character: neal, character: diana, character: peter, hurt/comfort: concussion, character: byron, character: june, whumpee: neal, art by aragarna, character: mozzie, fic

Comments 24

kanarek13 September 12 2013, 13:22:58 UTC

Wheeeee \o/ I was soooo looking forward to reading this \o/

It's greatness in pure form :D The story AND the art \o/

I love the shenanigans Peter and Mozz pulled to get back at the jerks who hurt Neal. It was so clever and so teen-like at the same time :D The kids sound both like teens and their canon adults - it's one of the things that made me smile the whole time while I was reading. The setup is completely different but all the things I love about White Collar are all still there, the friendship, banter, clever ideas, HUGS (and hogs, too, heee, although that part is not WC *lols*).

It also made my heart ache a bit at the thought of what Neal and Peter had gone through before they ended up at June's. They are such great kids. Good thing they have already realized that they are a real family.

Thank you for writing and posting it, definitely made my day \o/ Now I can drag myself home smiling :D *hugs*

angelita26 September 17 2013, 03:14:57 UTC

Thank you so much ( ... )

droodlebug September 12 2013, 15:11:52 UTC

Love this story and universe! Thanks so much for sharing it.

angelita26 September 17 2013, 03:15:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it because I have a couple more story ideas that I'd love to write in this 'verse. :)

sapphire2309 September 12 2013, 16:45:55 UTC

Principal Hughes was wonderfully in character! Loved the double finger point.

Mozzie was fantastic, especially with the pigs and the hiding behind hospital machinery. Neal not trusting him to not pull something important out was a lovely touch :D

Oh, Neal! He really is quite lost, isn't he?

This was fantastic!

angelita26 September 17 2013, 03:19:02 UTC

It took me a while to figure out what the final act of the 'get back at the bullies' plan would be, but as soon as I figured out that the principal would need to be involved, I immediately thought of Hughes. :)

Mozzie was a great joy to write in this 'verse. His idiosyncrasies make him so much fun. And Neal, poor Neal... I do put him through hell, but everyone wants to be there for him and wants to find a way to comfort him. He just has to find a way to let them all in.

Thank you so much!

morganslady September 12 2013, 23:23:12 UTC

Loved it!! Will there be more of The Lost Boys??? I like that Peter did something sneaky to get back at the Fratellis..

angelita26 September 17 2013, 03:21:32 UTC

Thank you! I do have a couple of more story ideas for this 'verse, so I think there will be more. I certainly love writing these characters.

I really enjoyed writing Peter and Mozzie working together to bring the Fratellis down. And making it a sneaky thing was a lot of fun too. :)

embroiderama September 13 2013, 00:20:17 UTC

I just have to tell you again that I loved this. ♥

angelita26 September 17 2013, 03:22:12 UTC

Thank you again for all your help and your suggestions. They made the story so much better. *HUGS*