Drabble Meme: Part Deux

Apr 16, 2014 21:24

In the comments, leave me the name of a character and a noun (place, emotion, thing, whatever). You can also specify a 'verse or story, if you'd like - my Masterlist will be up to date by the end of today (4/16). I'll write you a drabble, which I'm being less strict about this go 'round and saying it'll be between 100 and 300 words ( Read more... )

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angelita26 April 17 2014, 15:45:14 UTC
I feel like I should give full disclosure and say how bad I am at analyzing paintings, but I really liked this one, and I thought Neal would have a few things to say about it. Hope you like this!

Neal ignored Peter's watchful eyes as he slowly made his way through the new Marc Chagall exhibit at The Jewish Museum. The colorful paintings weren't Peter's cup of tea, but Neal loved them. The imagination and feeling behind them transcended everything - time, culture, the creator, the viewer.

One particular painting stood out to him, and Neal returned to it once he had seen all of the others. It was of a couple surrounded by a bouquet of flowers above the sea. On the side, one person was trying to touch the bouquet while another was falling or diving from it.

Neal startled when someone cleared their throat beside him, and he turned to find Peter standing there with his head cocked, examining the painting.

"Why this one?" Peter asked.

"It's gorgeous. The colors, the way the couple stands out from the rest, the brush strokes here and here." Neal gestured as best he could, wishing that he could actually touch the painting. "There's a sadness to the surroundings but the couple are in it together. They're holding each other close while others try to get in but can't."

Peter's hand fell on his shoulder and squeezed. Neal leaned in to the gesture as much as he could in the public space.

"We'll always let you in."

Neal gave him a soft smile and a quick nod. "Thank you."

(To view the painting, please click here)

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pooh_collector April 17 2014, 19:43:03 UTC
AWWWWWW!!!!

That was beautiful and beyond sweet. And, Neal's analysis was awesome!

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angelita26 April 20 2014, 20:35:41 UTC
Oh, good! I always get nervous when I analyze something, but I really liked that painting and I thought Neal would have many feels about it. Thank you so much!

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daria234 April 19 2014, 04:31:58 UTC
Love this!!

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angelita26 April 20 2014, 20:35:57 UTC
Thank you! <3

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kanarek13 April 19 2014, 18:23:39 UTC
Oh, beautiful. There's always something so unique when Neal is looking and talking about art. And when you combine that with his longing for love and family... awwww :DFrom that tiny gesture Peter made, at least we know he has already found love and family :D

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angelita26 April 20 2014, 20:37:16 UTC
I agree - Neal always has an interesting way of seeing art, and this painting seemed just perfect for him to want a second look at. Thank you so much!

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