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Oct 28, 2008 20:34

i feel nothing
when you hold my hand.
i stop breathing,
i stop feeling--
anything else.
(10.28.08)

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this is the best i can do right now. it's been a while since i wrote something, so be nice!!! haha. CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms allowed. ^^

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