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angelbutterfly3

One Mistake Changes the World

May 20, 2011 00:10

Title:One Mistake Changes the World
Pairing:Dean/Castiel, one-sided Castiel/Balthazar
Rating:PG
Beta:None
Warning/Spoilers:None really save for Death
Summary:Raphael makes a mistake that costs her and Castiel everything

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character:balthazar, lovely sad death, spn_fandom, pairing:dean/castiel

Comments 7

bloody_beary May 20 2011, 13:40:32 UTC

You need a beta. This has potential but is WAY too "all over the place" to even make sense.

deancaslover32 May 20 2011, 13:53:13 UTC

Awww.. how sad.. good thing it's not gonna end this way tonight -smiles- good story tho -s-

angelbutterfly3 May 21 2011, 11:03:13 UTC

Thank you. So now which ending do you like more. All dead or Cas evil and Dean in trouble?

deancaslover32 May 21 2011, 15:43:43 UTC

Ugh my heart hurts after last night -sighs- but i think i'd have evil cas because i think Dean can fix him somehow -s-

d767468 May 21 2011, 04:53:38 UTC

I think the story makes plenty of sense. Your writing style is what it is.
It was very sad. And almost a better ending than the finale.

angelbutterfly3 May 21 2011, 11:05:24 UTC

Thanks. ANd at least in my story Dean is free, dead but free. Not having to defeat a now evil Cas. I knew it was coming but hoped it wasn't

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Re: angelbutterfly3 July 11 2012, 02:41:46 UTC

the video doesn't work.What was it about?