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[angel_allison]

I wrote a story instead of studying today! YAAAY! This is dedicated to Benjamin, who gave me a very nice journal to write in.

I hope you all like it!

Comments

[the_loebster]

It's nice, but there are too many adjectives, it's way too discriptive. I mean, it's no John Grisham, but it's fine.

(I hope I didn't get any sarcasm on you, I realize the above phrase was dripping some.)

[dearestapathy]

Lovely.
Yes.
CHarming.

Interesting

[vivagem]

Interesting... thats all i can say

[smarturthanbush]

its good, but i got my fill of imagery from scarlet letter

[got_jenny]

I like it! When you become a famous author it's gonna be so cool cause I can brag to everyone in Manhattan (where I'll be living, dontcha know) that I know you! =D Hehe keep writing that! I wanna know what happens next ;)