Fic question

[anenko]

My characters won't stop yakking long enough to do anything. I've also stumbled into. . . creepy territory. Part of it is due to the nature of the prompt I'm filling, but. Hmm. The possessiveness is more disturbing than I'd intended ("I want to keep you for myself, always.") I have Character A addressing the fact that he's being a bit creepy, but I wonder if that's going against the spirit of the prompt.

Rework, gloss over, or address the potential negative implications of what Character A is saying?

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