Bad Sex & Awkward Romance: a comment-a-thon

[anenko]

Bad Sex & Awkward Romance
a comment-a-thon
Dreamwidth | LivejournalI love awkward romantic declarations and sex scenes. In an attempt to encourage people to cater to my desires, I bring you a comment-a-thon

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Fill: Tragic Mr. Teddy, One Piece, Luffy/Zoro

[anonymous]

It felt good. Even though he hated admitting it, his young captain was very good at sex. The boy had insisted that he had never done it before and yet... he knew all the right places and could reach every single one. Whether it was instinct or he was lying, the green haired man could care less. As long as the human bundle of energy let him choose the time and place, Zoro was fine. Which brings him, in desperation, try to remember exactly why he agreed to this .

"A little more to the left Zoro."

It was just a soft whisper in his ear but it seemed as though the teen was yelling. His head felt like it would burst, his legs were going numb, his lungs needed air, and to top it all off, Luffy was telling him exactly where to place his hand. Zoro groaned in discomfort as the arms that supported his torso tighten. Hearing the tell-tale snap of said teens head returning to it's rightful place, he whimpered.

"I'll make you feel good"

If that was supposed to be sexy, then the teen needed to stop taking lessons from the cook. Mainly because Zoro was pretty sure that this position was not meant for an over enthusiastic, rubber man. He managed to get air in to his lungs with a strangled gasp. In one last futile attempt, the swordsman twisted his torso to the side. His captor tightened his grip again.

"Ready?"

The inquiry was followed up with the usual thrust, no answer given. Dark evergreen eyes widened as Luffy didn't wait for him to adjust, his vision darkening as his lungs were denied more air. Zoro prayed for this to end. He did not want to die while having sex.

It seemed as though luck was on his side, the dark haired teen's thrusts were rapidly becoming erratic. The teens arms loosened some as he reached his climax, Zoro grunting at the uncomfortable feeling . He relaxed, letting exhaustion from trying to breathe claim him, his body going limp.

Luffy pulled out of the the man beneath him, who had just passed out. Finally the teen let go, his arms unwinding from the tanned torso. Shrugging the raven haired man curled up against the warm body, deciding that Zoro was like a teddy bear. Well maybe a really green, prickly one...

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AN- I just picked up writing again after doing a few essays and lots of French projects. It might not really make sense. (on anon cause i'm shy)

Re: Fill: Tragic Mr. Teddy, One Piece, Luffy/Zoro

[penniless1]

It doesn't yet it does because I just know Luffy forgets the limits of other humans, especially his first mate (what an oddly appropriate title in this case >:D).

Thank you for the reply!!!