Bad Sex & Awkward Romance: a comment-a-thon

[anenko]

Bad Sex & Awkward Romance
a comment-a-thon
Dreamwidth | LivejournalI love awkward romantic declarations and sex scenes. In an attempt to encourage people to cater to my desires, I bring you a comment-a-thon

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Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2

[ceitfianna]

He groaned and kissed Erik, their bodies slipping against each other and carefully lowered one wall then there was heat and desire and noticing the smoothness of his own underwear. It was disorienting and Erik stopped and stared at him before saying, “How much of that was me?”

“Half, I think, I didn’t think we’d mix like that. I’m sorry,”

He started to raise the wall in his head again when Erik kissed him and said, “A little longer. We can find the balance.”

The next few moments were complicated as it was hard to know where one began and the other ended and Charles cried out as he came much quicker than he wanted.

Gently he put the wall up again and found Erik investigating him with the same detail he gave to chess games or the question of the variety of stupid Alex was being today as he said, “I think we can make this work and don’t look so stricken. Its a rather pleasant thing to experiment with.”

“Yes, it is, but one time without anything else?”

Erik smirked and Charles considered that a smirk should not be quite that endearing, “One time and then we’ll see.”

“Fine,” Charles kissed Erik’s teasing smirk and the next time was simpler in terms of their emotions, positioning was confusing but that’s part of being new lovers. It was something Charles enjoyed, mental positioning was another matter entirely.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2

[tresa_cho]

Oh this was lovely.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2

[ceitfianna]

Thank you. I was really happy how it all came together.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2

[dodger_sister]

How did I miss this before? Guh. I loved that even when they were flirting, they still managed to sound so them.

Action tied with desire made time slip away and shirts and pants were thrown off with laughs and groans and as he felt his own erection move against Erik’s through their boxers, he heard a voice in his head say, Let them down.

See, I would think psychic sex would be hard to write, but you did it perfectly right there. That line said everything about how they fit together and I can hear Erik's voice in my head, and it was delicious.

Re: Open the Gates-XMFC, Charles/Erik, Rated R 2 of 2

[ceitfianna]

Thank you. This fic completely surprised me as it just came together in my head. I love them both so much and thinking about how they simply get parts of each other and then still have much to learn.