Bad Sex & Awkward Romance: a comment-a-thon

[anenko]

Bad Sex & Awkward Romance
a comment-a-thon
Dreamwidth | LivejournalI love awkward romantic declarations and sex scenes. In an attempt to encourage people to cater to my desires, I bring you a comment-a-thon

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Um....

[kidarania_nika]

I read this prompt this morning... at almost exactly 00:02... and I laughed, started writing, and immediately realized my mistake. It is now nearly two hours later and my Mountain Dew supply is running low. The last hour and a half has...changed, let's say, the outcome of this piece.

The current story-fanfic-thing has very little to do with the original prompt, though it /does/ have a little something to do with the day before. (Insert a wry shaking of the head here.) It doesn't even have either of the two characters I had originally planned the story to be about. But I did manage to keep the setting! Mostly. The rating went down from NC-17 to PG-14 and possibly back up again through the folly of lube, and the entire piece has accidentally become about my most hated character in the entire show.

Wanna read anyway?

It is non-canonical Naruto (gah!) if that helps you decide. ......It is also very, very gay. I think I mentioned a girl twice. Maybe. I am three pages in and I keep asking myself, "Would Gai-sensei really be proud? This is youthful, sure, but is it right?!"

So it is your choice. ^^;; Yes, no, maybe?

Re: Um....

[anenko]

Link it here when you're done. I'm interested in seeing where the prompt led you :)

Haha...

[kidarania_nika]

http://kidarania-nika.livejournal.com/13120.html

Not edited. Here ya go! ^^