My truthsome_fic fic... Hmmm... Think of a better title...

[andsheloves]

So, here it is. This is my first ever fanfic, so please be kind and comment. Thanks

Comments

[youngcurmudgeon]

“I can’t stand to be around you...”
“Well, there you go.”

Gah, I love these two. Mal's a dork, and you have Inara's voice down. Feel free to write more! :-)

[andsheloves]

Thanks so much! That's so nice!!! You're so kind!!!

[youngcurmudgeon]

No problem! The world needs more feedback. And you have a good voice here that you must develop. ... Since I have, you know, so much knowledge about writing and all. :-)

[andsheloves]

Thanks! I love comments. And I tried my very hardest.

I got all the Chinese from the shooting script, so there you go...

[agent_rouka]

I'm going to have to love this already for having someone in it named "Margery" and having that named yelled across a room. *G* Somehow that cracked me up immensely!

Thank you!!! I love the constant misunderstandings and the fact that Mal tried to be sneaky and Inara's mixed up emotions and the beginning because it's just such a sad scene, having her walk out on him, and especially the ending. It's so sweet.

My prompts probably wasn't the easiest (and I apologize) so thank you for writing this so adorably! :)

[andsheloves]

I'm so glad you like it!!! I had so much fun writing it, and I'm glad you like Margery, she just popped into my head.

Thanks for your kind comment. It makes me so happy. :)

[_atmospheric]

I know I said this when I beta-ed, but this is so awesome. Fights = Jayne, no doubt about that. *g*

[andsheloves]

Thanks!!! I just had to throw in a Jayne fight in there somewhere.

[_atmospheric]

*g* It works really well!

[buffygirl52789]

I really liked this! Mal sending the crew out on a fake job so he can be alone with Inara is just giggle-worthy. Teehee. And I loved the end. "Don't ruin it." Teehee! Very nicely done.

[andsheloves]

Thanks!!! I'm so glad people like it!!