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[azuraangel05]

Title: Don't Move, Don't Speak, Just Listen

Fandom: Desperate Housewives

Pairings: Andrew/Justin

Rating: R

Disclaimer: Don't own a thing.

Summary: Sooner or later you have to deal with the people you leave behind.

Comments

[denzelryuu]

oh my god... it is so nice to see the perspective of Justin... Love your fic... I really hope there will be a happy ending for these two though... and by happy ending, i mean them getting back together :P

[denzelryuu]

sry, not sure if there is any edit option

I noticed that you had Justin walking home, but midway through the conversation with Andrew, Justin suddenly has a car?

[denzelryuu]

sry... just realized a few more things.. if Justin is really really drunk and hence why he was kicked out of Kyle's party, then shouldn't he not be driving in the end, regardless of how he obtained the car?? Also, why is Justin backing out of the driveway?? I thought they were at the pizza place Andrew works at?

[azuraangel05]

Runs off to fix several mistakes. Should really get a beta.

[azuraangel05]

I'm so glad you liked this fic and oh crap you're right! Originally I had Justin walking home from the party and Justin meeting Andrew at work occuring on two different nights. Then I decided I'd rather have the whole thing happen on the same night and I guess I forgot to retool that part. *Runs off to fix mistake*