FINALLY! I did a Komik Bits about this story recently, talking about just how long this story's been sitting on my drawing board (a little over a year), and it managed to get me to finish it. So...Hooray
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story-wise, I liked the way you used the trickster archetype to create the Pareng Ahas. Is he a recurring character?
There were also points that reminded me of Warren Ellis and Carlos Pacheco's Starjammers LS and Hayao Miyazaki's Spirited Away.
art-wise, I loved the depiction of Asong Kalye, but some of the staccato shots could do with a change in perspective. For example, the "run-flee-hide" trio of shots could do with bringing the "camera" a little bit closer just so that the rhythm of reading doesn't slow down.
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There were also points that reminded me of Warren Ellis and Carlos Pacheco's Starjammers LS and Hayao Miyazaki's Spirited Away.
art-wise, I loved the depiction of Asong Kalye, but some of the staccato shots could do with a change in perspective. For example, the "run-flee-hide" trio of shots could do with bringing the "camera" a little bit closer just so that the rhythm of reading doesn't slow down.
all in all, a solid story :)
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