A song I just wrote about my life

[andrew_cooney]

P-O-V-E-R-T-Y
That's what happens when you don't try
To get a job or stay in school
But luckily your friend is cool
And lets you live inside his house
With your pet rats and mouse
Buckets, oh my baaaby girl
Tonight I'll give you all the world
But whats the world to a pet rat?
A fresh water bottle and some snacks?

And then it more or less repeats.. What do you think?