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Apr 11, 2009 08:25

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Time for everyone to let their inner Exhibitionist out of the closet

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 16:15:29 UTC

There were stairs on the sides of the stage. “Come on,“ he said, sliding out, “we’re going up there.”

She nodded, and followed him….because she’d never get tired of it, just like he’d always told her.

“Good girl.”

Once on stage, his old showman instincts took over. He took off his coat and laid it down with a flourish. Then he quickly pulled the braces away from his shoulders and gave the crowd a gander at something better than anything they’d seen on the screen. That guy in Cuba, never had anything on Jack Harkness.

With that out of the way, he lay down on top of the coat and gave Gwen another nod. Apparently, the former PC had a bit of the hambone herself, holding open her jacket in case anyone had missed the point earlier and then straddling Jack, the leather skirt rising to show off her ass.
In the fantasies, their own coupling hadn’t been quite this public, but that was before Jack found out exactly how far Gwen was willing to go, and now it was his turn to lie back and his wildcat take him, riding his cock, as she squeezed him from the inside and her hands gripped his arms.

He had to close his eyes against the glare, and the keep the audience in his memory as he gave in to the full realisation of what he was doing and where it was happening and who he was doing it with and that she could and would do these things over and over anyplace anytime and it was too much. He screamed her name, so he could pull her down against him tightly, as he came. The booming soundtrack drowned him out, as the paid performers reached another climax to complement his.

When he opened his eyes, he could see Gwen’s face, her teeth biting down on her lower lip, lipstick smeared into a sloppy mess, utterly debauched for his pleasure and still straining to find her own release.

He whispered into her ear, reminding her who and what she was and most specifically whose, as he reached between her legs, fingers working feverishly until she went over as well, thrashing and panting.

Her eyeliner had become a ruin as well, and she was one of the most beautiful things Jack had ever seen.

By now, he suspected the manager might be looking to have them thrown out, unless he was planning to offer a steady job, five days a week with matinees on Mondays.

Jack would have been tempted, but he’d have to decline. They couldn’t afford him.

He helped Gwen to her feet. There was no way either of them could look decent, much less respectable, but it would make sense to avoid another exposure arrest on the way back to the car.

The first one had been her fault completely. Jack hadn’t suspected for a minute that she would actually try to do that in the middle of traffic on a Wednesday afternoon. Now he knew better. He knew there was nothing she wouldn’t do and the thought made him a little giddy and lot horny.

“That was amazing, Jack. Absolutely amazing. The look on his face. All those people looking at me.”

Apparently Gwen was a bit giddy with the experience as well.

He couldn’t wait to get her back to the hub, to relive it again, this time in private, where they could relish the memory of every detail.

“So what’s next,” he asked, starting the SUV.

“We’ll take a shower and I’ll fix up my make-up so I can do it to you this time and…”

“No, I’ mean the next…thing. It’s your turn to pick one.”

The smile that came to her smudged lips was enough to make Jack thought he might have to pull over to the side of the road and risk that arrest after all.

“Let’s just say it’s going to require hand-cuffs, a blindfold and a riding crop.”

“I like the sound of that.”

“Oh, and did I mention Tosh?”

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 andreth47 April 11 2009, 18:06:31 UTC
Oh, naughty Gwen! You are a kinky, kinky woman. Cool! ;)

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 andreth47 April 11 2009, 18:10:03 UTC
Also, Mac responded to your fic, but she put the comment as a reply to the main post, so I deleted it (since only fic s/be replies to main post). Hey Mac, wanna re-reply? :)

Also also, I quite like Gwen's idea for their next little game. Yum.

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 18:14:59 UTC
Thanks sweetie. Glad you liked and also great thanks for hosting. I'm absolutely convinced Gwen is the nasty, kinky girl who'd have no problem with offices or anything else Jack would come up with.

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 andreth47 April 11 2009, 18:33:47 UTC
That's what I like about Gwen: she's a straightforward broad who isn't the least bit ashamed that she likes to punch and shoot and drink and fuck with the best of 'em.

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 51stcenturyfox April 11 2009, 18:12:44 UTC
Whoops, out of comment porn reply practice!

Very hot. And I love the kinky, seedy setting. Jack would want to give a good show for certain. :D

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 18:15:42 UTC
Thank you! I decided to go hard-core nasty and show just how perfectl these two would be together. :)

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 wiredblowfish April 11 2009, 18:46:51 UTC
I think you really have something here. Jack is such an exhibitionist and Gwen is such a risk-taker, they are bound to do anything together. I like how you found their common interest:)

Great story! Very transgressive and super sexy!

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 19:02:32 UTC
Thanks-They really are perfect playmates for each other. Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed.

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 oneloveonelight April 11 2009, 18:58:11 UTC
My god you are so filthy! OH, this was smoking! HOT!

I do really love Jack and Ianto together but, just once (at least!), I'd like to see Jack and Gwen go at it on the show, and not just a little snog either. Pleasepleaseplease...

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 19:01:22 UTC
Thank you so much! *TWIRLS*

Hey, babe, I'm with you. I want J/G canon complete with Adrift level (or higher) graphic sex. The John/Eve chem is absolutely screaming for it to happen.

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 oneloveonelight April 11 2009, 19:12:15 UTC
The whole time I'm reading that, I'm like "God, yes, I'd be game for anything for Jack too.."

I seriously think John and Eve have great real life chemistry and they NEED to take advantage of that on the show. It'd be very sad not to address it. Rhys and Ianto can... watch or give each other hand jobs or something, I don't know. Hee!

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 19:16:15 UTC
I wrote a Rhys/Ianto drabble once to get them together. No ship-warring here, but Jack/Gwen seem much more sexually sympatico to me.

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 andreth47 April 11 2009, 19:23:16 UTC
And we're not going any farther with this topic, okay? This isn't the place. Comment about the posted fic only, please. Thanks!

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 karaokegal April 11 2009, 20:45:19 UTC
No worries! Bows to the moderator. :)

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Re: Torchwood-Jack/Gwen Part 3 andreth47 April 11 2009, 20:48:59 UTC
Thanks, dear. I appreciate it!

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