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Public Displays of Affection Comment Porn Battle

Apr 11, 2009 08:25

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Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part One blue_fjords April 11 2009, 14:40:32 UTC

erm, mine's rated PG-13...higher rating for the next one ( ... )

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 11 2009, 14:44:28 UTC

“And the other responded, ‘I have been searching for you.’” Two men ran through the fountain, skirting close to the invisible lift, and when they caught each other, their laughter echoed across the Plass; one like wind chimes outside his auntie’s house when Ianto was small, one like the quick thwak-thwak of Jack’s braces and belt hitting Ianto’s floor now that he was not ( ... )

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two marita_c April 11 2009, 14:57:12 UTC

Oh wow! beautiful. Stoned Ianto is a real treat. This was sexy, sad and perfect :)

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 11 2009, 15:14:47 UTC

Thanks! I hadn't written stoned Ianto before, and he said he wanted the drugs.

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two marita_c April 11 2009, 15:18:50 UTC

And we wouldn't want to deny him of that, now, would we? :P

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two wiredblowfish April 11 2009, 18:31:15 UTC

Beautiful the way Ianto's stoned mind is so poetic:

"Twin golden pools falling down their shoulders"; Jack as the Tiger, Tiger burning bright...

Something very sexy about how vulnerable Ianto is here.

Very romantic...and sad.

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 11 2009, 23:23:40 UTC

It's weird; I hadn't intended to go sad, but it just went there.
I think Jack and Ianto like trading off taking care of the other when they're vulnerable. At least, I like it!

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two oneloveonelight April 11 2009, 18:49:49 UTC

This was very beautiful, I love seeing Jack taking good care of Ianto, being gentle with him at times and I think he will remember that moment forever. :)

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 11 2009, 23:24:54 UTC

They're both so action hero-y, I like to see them gentle from time to time. Thanks for the comment!

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two lionessvalenti April 11 2009, 22:13:11 UTC

This is like word porn. Passages like this: ...their laughter echoed across the Plass; one like wind chimes outside his auntie’s house when Ianto was small, one like the quick thwak-thwak of Jack’s braces and belt hitting Ianto’s floor now that he was not. are just absolutely beautiful in their gorgeous detail and tone.

I think everyone here, myself included, as writers, can appreciate good word porn.

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two andreth47 April 11 2009, 22:15:13 UTC

WORD, sistah! *intends pun* And I completely agree, this is a lovely fic!

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 11 2009, 23:26:24 UTC

Thanks! And thanks for hosting! :)

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 11 2009, 23:20:15 UTC

Word Porn! Oh, thank you, how lovely!

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two dvanulya April 12 2009, 19:02:18 UTC

This is quite lovely and quite sad, too.

Re: Torchwood, Jack/Ianto - Part Two blue_fjords April 12 2009, 19:55:11 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! I was on a sad kick.

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