WALL OF DEATH

[andiivalo]

Title: WALL OF DEATH
Author: andiivalo
Category: Gen
Characters: Dean, Sam, Bobby.
Pairings: None
Rating: PG-13
Summary: If you make a mess on a job, you clean up properly or face the consequences. When Dean fails to clean up the way his daddy prescribed, he and Sam find themselves in the worst kind of trouble.

Set Season 2, After Born Under a Bad Sign.

Comments

[andiivalo]

Bwahahaha!

[taylorariel]

Thank You for the new chapter.

I could feel Dean's tension as I read every word. And then when Kate and Tim appeared and talked to the boys about what was coming I could feel that sickening cold wave of fear race silently through Dean.

I thought Sam's request at the end was stupid. Dean will be fighting for his life. I would expect him to kill the bastards.

But the mention of Bobby gives me hope. And the "handicap" makes me look forward to your next chapter. I am an Addict and the more "HurtDean" the better :)

Thank You.

[andiivalo]

I think Sam understands Dean's between a rock and a hard place but he's thinking to the future, to a saner Dean and how his brother's guilt will react badly to the fact he killed something human, even if only barely so.

[dieotter]

I love the new chapter! Great description of what's going on inside Dean's head. It's so like him, to take all the blame on himself. I love how you called Dean "emotional retard", it really fits XD But Sam doubting Bobby kind of broke my heart. The "handicap" worries me as well, can't wait for the next chapter!

[andiivalo]

The Bobby thing needed to be addressed, I think. I would have questioned it, just out of habit.

[dieotter]

Yeah, that's true, and it fits perfectly that it was Sam who questioned Bobby's actions. Dean is the one to never doubt his family, while Sam is the one to think everything through.

[reggie11]

A handicap? God, I dread to think what that psycho has planned. I can't believe how cowardly the others are being. They know Kate is off her rocker and yet they do nothing to help.

Sam's request is absolutely ridiculous. It's kill or be killed. I hope Dean doesn't hesitate to take them down if he has to.

[andiivalo]

Well like I said above...

[zana_zira]

[andiivalo]

This chapter flowed pretty freely - probably because it's been so long since I last wrote. I'm starting on the next chapter soon so hopefully sometime next week...