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WALL OF DEATH

Jul 22, 2014 01:28

Title: WALL OF DEATH
Author: andiivalo
Category: Gen
Characters: Dean, Sam, Bobby.
Pairings: None
Rating: PG-13
Summary: If you make a mess on a job, you clean up properly or face the consequences. When Dean fails to clean up the way his daddy prescribed, he and Sam find themselves in the worst kind of trouble.

Set Season 2, After Born Under a Bad Sign.

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Comments 14

tifaching July 22 2014, 01:04:08 UTC

I do love drugged up, defensive and smart mouthed Dean. You are serving him up perfectly here. Can't wait to see what happens next.

andiivalo July 22 2014, 21:32:51 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm glad I'm getting him right. Sometimes it's hard to know, especially when you go a little off reservation from what the show's dealt with.

zana_zira July 22 2014, 01:08:41 UTC

andiivalo July 22 2014, 21:32:03 UTC

As I said below, I wrote this chapter and chapter five as one, then split them as it was too long. CH5 coming very soon.

vyperdd July 22 2014, 01:15:23 UTC

Arrgggggggghhhhhhhhh, not fair to leave it there. That's just cruel!!!!!

Another fantastic chapter and a great look inside Dean's head. Man, he really is messed up. Those pills are making him on edge and paranoid. Neither of the times he was shot was Sam's fault but Dean can't or won't see that, thanks to the drugs. And now thinking Sam wants to kill him???? It's starting to explain the Dean we saw in the first chapter.

Really, really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

andiivalo July 22 2014, 21:31:10 UTC

Thanks for that. I always look forward to your comments on each chapter. I actually wrote this one and chapter five together, then split them up as it was too long and the second part wasn't quite ready. Bottom line is chapter five will be up much sooner than I anticipated.

mdlaw July 22 2014, 01:45:22 UTC

Stopping there is truly evil. m :)

andiivalo July 22 2014, 21:30:16 UTC

I know. I do it because I'm evil and I can. ;o)

deansbellyrub July 22 2014, 06:02:57 UTC

Congrats again for keeping them both in character, it's like reading a script of an episode (the good old ones, of course;))!
Oh Dean, Sam's gonna be so pissed when he finds out you stole the pills... well, after you kick those two hunters ass! people should really think twice before messing with the Winchester boys... ^^
Can't wait for next chapter, great job at ending this one right THERE!
Now give us the next one, please.... we got pie! :D

andiivalo July 22 2014, 21:29:42 UTC

About the highest compliment anybody can pay me is to say it comes across like a script. Well, obviously not a script as that would be quite dull, but like an episode as that's what I'm always striving to write. So thanks a lot.