Been thinking about this....

Mar 24, 2007 13:06

So, yeah, it's about time to update this.

This time: A look at Eiji's most frustrating day - and the beginning of a change no one who knows him likes much at all (except for one, and he's... the reason).

Part 12 )

fic: change of circumstances, writing, fanfiction

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sugarcakey March 24 2007, 20:00:21 UTC
Uh, just seems like things tend to be even worse...(Poor Eiji, it's kinda heartbreaking ;-; )
Nya, let's see how this will continue ^___^ I'm as curious as always XDD

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andersenmom March 24 2007, 21:03:29 UTC
Yep, things just keep getting worse and worse (they have to, before they can get better, right?).

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dizzy_grace March 24 2007, 22:31:10 UTC
*attempts to find hitman to take out Eiji's father*

*hugs Eiji* Poor thing! Nothing's going his way. That's just horrible. His father's a real bastard. I'm so intrigued though! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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andersenmom March 24 2007, 22:57:46 UTC
I suggest Fuji....

No, nothing is going his way. It doesn't get better for a while, either.

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chouta_angel March 24 2007, 23:58:53 UTC
So, wait, what about the phone call to Fuji?

And, Atobe. Again. He sneaks up in your fics, doesn't he?

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andersenmom March 25 2007, 00:26:25 UTC
Atobe is ALWAYS there. I don't get it.

The phone call wasn't really that important (or at least the content of it wasn't).

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chouta_angel March 25 2007, 05:03:48 UTC
The only reason the phone call sticks out in my head is that Fuji made Eiji promise to call him. And yet, Papa Kikumaru just forbade his son from having any contact with his Seigaku friends. So, what's gonna happen when Fuji gets no call from Eiji? Or is Eiji going to defy Papa Kikumaru and call his friend anyway?

You know, I'm not sure Eiji realizes it, but it looks like he's holding all the right cards right now. Papa Kikumaru wants Eiji because of his connection with Atobe. So, if Papa Kikumaru pushes Eiji too far, couldn't Eiji just refuse to have any contact with Atobe? Although, Papa Kikumaru is supporting the rest of the Kikumaru clan...

Also, Papa Kikumaru, uh, don't like you. You're a horrible father.

Why does my brain work at 1 am and not at, like, 8-9 pm?

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chouta_angel March 25 2007, 05:07:29 UTC
Definitely did not see the last few bits before. So, Eiji does call Fuji. Somehow I missed that and the belt beating.

Wow. Papa Kikumaru, watch out. Please, walk down this nice, dark alley. No, there's no assassin tensai's waiting in the building that's at just the perfect angle to take you down. I promise :D .

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hyper_dragon March 30 2007, 06:20:07 UTC
Wah, I love "Shattered" so much that I decided to peruse your journal for more wonderful fanfiction, and I find this! So awesome!

Keep up the great work! (And I'm gonna die from cliffhanger overload...)

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andersenmom March 30 2007, 13:54:19 UTC
Sorry about the cliffhangers - it must be from the Hardy Boys books I devoured when I was younger.

I'm glad you've enjoyed my fiction! It's been fun to write, and it's good to hear that people are reading it.

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andersenmom March 30 2007, 13:58:40 UTC
And oh, it's been that long since I'v updated this, huh?

I'll do that today. I'm Sooo sorry! I got caught up in an rp I've been doing, and completely forgot.

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