Fic: "The Elegy Season" (Peter/Claire) NC-17

Aug 25, 2008 13:29

Title: The Elegy Season
Author: Steph (andbless_mybaby)
Pairing: Peter/Claire (canon)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst, sex, incest
Spoilers: 1.23, “How to Stop an Exploding Man”
Summary: AU after the S1 finale. Claire and Peter are the last two people alive in New York City.
Word Count: 4,700

A/N: I started this story well over a year ago, and only just ( Read more... )

pairing: peter/claire, rating: nc-17

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pcdarkrose August 25 2008, 19:41:11 UTC
I haven't read yet but I want to let you know how excited I am to be reading something new from you :D

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andbless_mybaby August 25 2008, 20:04:01 UTC
Aww, thank you. It feels good to have finished something! I'll be looking forward to knowing how you liked it. :)

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pcdarkrose August 26 2008, 03:43:50 UTC
OMG! Where do I start? How about that nod to Gatsby? That was an indicator as to how magnificent this would be.

So eloquently written. Heart wrenching. So chilling. Paire + apocalypse=my other OT3

Peter wanting to commit suicide so he doesn’t have to feel the guilt of what he’s done and because he’s scared of hurting the last person he loves.*heart shatters*

The imagery, the metaphors…remarkable.

I love how Claire is his anchor. Peter crying for Nathan, okay now the pieces of my heart are bleeding.

I am such a masochist lol and I love it because you write Paire beautifully.

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andbless_mybaby August 26 2008, 09:24:15 UTC
Thank you so very much for that beautiful feedback. Paire is actually not my favorite pairing ever, so (like I said to mab below) it means everything to me that you guys who are fans of the two of them enjoyed it.

Seriously - thank you for reading. :)

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andbless_mybaby August 25 2008, 21:38:44 UTC
Thank you x1,000,000. You just made my whole day, pretty much. :)

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andbless_mybaby August 26 2008, 01:58:40 UTC
Oh my god, you are so incredibly awesome! It feels so, so good to have had the time/motivation to even *finish* a story, and you pretty much put the icing on the proverbial cake. I'm a thoroughly happy Steph right now!

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sinverguenza August 26 2008, 00:02:26 UTC
oh, jesus christ. this was so good that it hurt me. and oh please, PLEASE your note at the beginning is such bullshit. i will hunt down any paire fan that dares to skip this deeply sensual yet lonely fic. i'm sure they won't because just a couple sentences in and you will have them hooked.

i really like the angle you take on peter and claire. its quite different from the usual, yet...its very peter and claire. they will always have a broken heart at the center of their love, no matter how wonderful it is. thank you for never forgetting that.

in more general terms, i have missed your writing SO SO SO SO much, and i'm pleased that you have more time for it in the future. thank you, steff, this was beautiful.

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andbless_mybaby August 26 2008, 02:16:36 UTC
I only speak the truth.

I'm deeply, deeply happy that you enjoyed this. You know that I'm really not a big Paire lover, and it's gratifying to know that I didn't flub the dynamic.

I really do think the world of you as a writer. I was rereading some of your stuff the other day (during the monsters' afternoon nap... can I just say thank god for regular-ish sleep patterns?!), and was marveling at how I pretty much adore everything you've ever written. Although I will say that I've now read "Wanted" so many times that there are certain parts of it that I could probably recite from memory.

Long story short, I appreciate your appreciation. :)

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sinverguenza August 26 2008, 15:59:02 UTC
oh, stop. you flatter me! i actually saved some of your sylar/claire fics to my hard drive, just in case you ever decided to delete them.

so i appreciate YOU right back, missy.

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shimmeree August 26 2008, 04:10:46 UTC
I don't really know where to begin, because I feel like there is just so much I want to say. I've said again and again that I love your writing, but it's more than just that. It's like poetry, your writing. Beautiful. I can't stress enough how much it just breaks my heart. And Paire? Kills me. It makes me exceptionally happy that you're still with Heroes. Thank you for posting this.

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andbless_mybaby August 26 2008, 09:28:47 UTC
Thank you so, so very much. I'm terribly happy that you enjoyed it. :)

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kathrynthegr8 August 26 2008, 11:30:11 UTC
Wow, I just. Amazing. Someone commenting above me said it was a beutiful yet lonely story, and I have to agree. This fic is so good, I never want to write again, cause damn girl!

Welcome back, you have been missed!

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andbless_mybaby August 26 2008, 13:30:15 UTC
Thank you. I've missed myself, lol.

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