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Behind Blue Eyez
It was a dark and lonely night and Michelle had been crying for an hour or two. The only reason she was crying was because her boyfriend, mike, had left for Iraq the night before and she was scared that he might never come back. Then when someone tried to come in she would wipe her tears really quick but the only person that would come in was her best friend, Kenny. Kenny didn’t like to see Michelle cry because if he saw her cry he would start shedding a few tears too. While he seen Michelle like this he just wanted to hold her until she stopped. That night was different; he had held her until she fell asleep. He stayed by her side the whole night so that when she woke up he made sure she was okay. Then out of the blue she got a call at about 2 AM and it was from Mike and he said that he was doing just fine and that she shouldn’t worry. Then she screamed and he asked what was wrong. So she said about how she seen Kenny in there but he wasn’t himself. Mike wondered how this could be. It made him think. So even during the war he was thinking about it all the time. It took him about a year and a half to figure out that he couldn’t find out how he was different. Then a year and a half later on the same date at 2 AM. Michelle answered and they started talking and then Mike just asked “Do you remember that one night I called and u said that Kenny wasn’t himself”, “Yes, why you ask?” Michelle asked. “How did he look different?” Mike wondered. So as they went on with the conversation she looked down at the side of her bed and there lied Kenny. She had to do a second glance to notice that he wasn’t moving and that he had something written on his back on a tattoo. So she read it and it said “If you are reading this and you know a Girl named Michelle please let her know that I’ve loved her since the day I seen her.” Michelle dropped the phone in awe. Then she turned Kenny over to tell him her true feelings but as she turned him over she had noticed the puddle of blood that was under him. She had just now noticed that she had dropped the phone with Mike still on it. Mike asked, “What’s wrong honey?” Then a complete silence broke down. So Mike repeated himself then finally Michelle said “ Well I looked at Kenny and on his Tattoo, you know the one he had gotten, well it said If you are reading this and you know a Girl named Michelle please let her know that I’ve loved her since the day I seen her.” So Mike thought about his conversations with Kenny and then it hit him. Kenny had said something about that tattoo but Mike never thought anything of it. Kenny’s words of his tattoo ringed in Mikes ears for about four to five days. Mike called Michelle back then said about how sorry he was about what had happened to Kenny and how he just had to think about what to say about it. Then after the 4 years in the service over in Iraq he came home and noticed that Michelle had been on the floor next to Kenny, it had smelled like dead bodies. Before he did anything he looked at Kenny’s tattoo and then he noticed something on the back of Michelle. She had a note attached to her and it read” I’m so sorry Mike but it just wasn’t right I couldn’t do this to you I’ve really been in love with Kenny the whole time that you were over in Iraq” Then precisely at 2 AM Mike had gotten a tattoo that said “ I’m sorry for everything I have done”.
Behind Blue Eyez
It was a dark and lonely night and Michelle had been crying for an hour or two. The only reason she was crying was because her boyfriend, mike, had left for Iraq the night before and she was scared that he might never come back. Then when someone tried to come in she would wipe her tears really quick but the only person that would come in was her best friend, Kenny. Kenny didn’t like to see Michelle cry because if he saw her cry he would start shedding a few tears too. While he seen Michelle like this he just wanted to hold her until she stopped. That night was different; he had held her until she fell asleep. He stayed by her side the whole night so that when she woke up he made sure she was okay. Then out of the blue she got a call at about 2 AM and it was from Mike and he said that he was doing just fine and that she shouldn’t worry. Then she screamed and he asked what was wrong. So she said about how she seen Kenny in there but he wasn’t himself. Mike wondered how this could be. It made him think. So even during the war he was thinking about it all the time. It took him about a year and a half to figure out that he couldn’t find out how he was different. Then a year and a half later on the same date at 2 AM. Michelle answered and they started talking and then Mike just asked “Do you remember that one night I called and u said that Kenny wasn’t himself”, “Yes, why you ask?” Michelle asked. “How did he look different?” Mike wondered. So as they went on with the conversation she looked down at the side of her bed and there lied Kenny. She had to do a second glance to notice that he wasn’t moving and that he had something written on his back on a tattoo. So she read it and it said “If you are reading this and you know a Girl named Michelle please let her know that I’ve loved her since the day I seen her.” Michelle dropped the phone in awe. Then she turned Kenny over to tell him her true feelings but as she turned him over she had noticed the puddle of blood that was under him. She had just now noticed that she had dropped the phone with Mike still on it. Mike asked, “What’s wrong honey?” Then a complete silence broke down. So Mike repeated himself then finally Michelle said “ Well I looked at Kenny and on his Tattoo, you know the one he had gotten, well it said If you are reading this and you know a Girl named Michelle please let her know that I’ve loved her since the day I seen her.” So Mike thought about his conversations with Kenny and then it hit him. Kenny had said something about that tattoo but Mike never thought anything of it. Kenny’s words of his tattoo ringed in Mikes ears for about four to five days. Mike called Michelle back then said about how sorry he was about what had happened to Kenny and how he just had to think about what to say about it. Then after the 4 years in the service over in Iraq he came home and noticed that Michelle had been on the floor next to Kenny, it had smelled like dead bodies. Before he did anything he looked at Kenny’s tattoo and then he noticed something on the back of Michelle. She had a note attached to her and it read” I’m so sorry Mike but it just wasn’t right I couldn’t do this to you I’ve really been in love with Kenny the whole time that you were over in Iraq” Then precisely at 2 AM Mike had gotten a tattoo that said “ I’m sorry for everything I have done”.